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SomDxD
SomDxDAuthor3yr
2022-03-18 14:34

Hello readers, Author here. This is the first novel I have written. This novel includes what I would in a novel where MC has the memory of this Earth. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.

Parallel Memory

SomDxD
4.4
513 Chs

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Dyno_goku
Dyno_gokuLv4

can you tell me name of the original novel. without our oc

3yr
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DaoisttstKjp
DaoisttstKjpLv12

More chapters

3yr
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Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5

Hárèm ?

3yr
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SomDxD
SomDxDAuthor

Like many similar novels, I decided to leave the original novel name blank. I might add it later if it is required but for now, there is no name.

Dyno_goku:can you tell me name of the original novel. without our oc
3yr
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Dyno_goku
Dyno_gokuLv4

I want to see the characters photos but cannot find them that's the reason I want to see the original novel so i can who is who

SomDxD:Like many similar novels, I decided to leave the original novel name blank. I might add it later if it is required but for now, there is no name.
3yr
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Zamir
ZamirLv15

Will the mc have the memory of other alternate selves instead of just his life on earth?

3yr
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Lilith_Uroboros
Lilith_UroborosLv1

Ya que tiene los recuerdos de su yo de la tierra DEBERIA aprovecharlos al maximo siempre me molesto que los MC no usen todo lo que saben para empoderarse por ejemplo un MC que termine en naruto se apega a naruto sin intentar recrear tecnicas de otros animes como un kame hame ha hecho de chakra y lo mismo pasa en muc en dragon ball u otra serie por eso digo ya que tiene el conocimiento DEBERIA USARLO lo mismo para tu MC por que no recrea tecnicas de otros animes y juegos en este mundo ?? Incluso los clones normales de naruto que son ilusiones serian ultra utiles solo mira a blake de RWBY y su semblanza Hay MUCHAS cosas que podria hacer para volverse poderoso pero los ignoran por completo incluso el conocimiento de sus estudios en la TIERRA deberian darle ventaja podria usar su conocimiento para controlar mejor la magia elemental incluso usar ejercicios de control de otras series para controlar mejor su magia,etc En fin eso es todo lo que queria decir este fanfic tuyo es muy bueno hasta ahora por eso te digo esto no hagas que MC desperdice su conocimiento de la tierra como otros MC haz que lo aproveche al maximo y no solo se centre en las cosas de la novela

3yr
SomDxD
SomDxDAuthor

No comment!

Zamir:Will the mc have the memory of other alternate selves instead of just his life on earth?
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RTDwinter
RTDwinterLv15

Is there gonna be a harem?

DaoisttstKjp:More chapters
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SUS
SUSLv3

Nice

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SUS
SUSLv3

Nice

3yr
drake1552
drake1552Lv2

hi author I am an aspirant, who is motivated by your work to write a novel keep up the good work yours faithful

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R0Y
R0YLv13

hey mr author just want to that can we trust that this novel gonna have daily updates coz the content is great it doesn't look like your a first timer though but it'd be great if you release a chapter daily

3yr
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SomDxD
SomDxDAuthor

Thank you for your kind words. This is really my first novel or any kind of writing for that matter. I planned to release at least 10 chapters in a week from now on.

R0Y:hey mr author just want to that can we trust that this novel gonna have daily updates coz the content is great it doesn't look like your a first timer though but it'd be great if you release a chapter daily
3yr
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R0Y
R0YLv13

that's great to hear it's really an exciting experience to journey with the book and trust me this is also one of a kind and the real reason isn't in the mob character development of strength but the characters and the story development which always gives a twirk here and there and makes the story goes on. I'm really looking forward for the upcoming chapters thank you

SomDxD:Thank you for your kind words. This is really my first novel or any kind of writing for that matter. I planned to release at least 10 chapters in a week from now on.
3yr
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R0Y
R0YLv13

I officially propose a demand of 2 chapters per week for this novel if anyone is interested please join me to motivate the author to write more. And I'm absolutely not being greedy for the upcoming content 😉

3yr
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Dwaystowniessr
DwaystowniessrLv10

Do you have a discord server?? If u do pls link!!!!

SomDxD:Thank you for your kind words. This is really my first novel or any kind of writing for that matter. I planned to release at least 10 chapters in a week from now on.
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SomDxD
SomDxDAuthor

No, I don't have a discord server.

Dwaystowniessr:Do you have a discord server?? If u do pls link!!!!
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kreto_D_Degenerate
kreto_D_DegenerateLv2

a random meme for you author

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Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv14

You not saying no gives me hope

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SHiRa155
SHiRa155Lv4

a very good novel and an interesting plot keep it up bro don't stop and update regularly I am super sure that this novel has a lot of potential keep up the good work

3yr

Dark_Eterium
Dark_EteriumLv3

I'll keep it short, after going through 40 chapters, I still no nothing about our Mc, not in the sense of his family and friends, but why he thinks how he thinks, why does his morals A B C, why is this his train of thought, who is he really, and this is problematic because then it has no essence, the mc has no character. This novel can still be saved however, but before you can build the world, I suggest you a singular person, our main character, for if the lens are dull, then the picture will so as well.

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ShrikantSahu
ShrikantSahuLv3

I am loving the chapters you're posting bro. The world development is good and the characters are freaking amazing. I would like lots and lots of chapters in the future. It has limitless potential. Keep up the good work 👍

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Dzima
DzimaLv15

I would rate this story higher but there are a couple problems. The writing quality is a bit bad and would improve A lot by only putting it through a grammer checker. Another major problem is that it is almost a carbon copy of the Authers POV with some differences. It currently only has 30 chapters but i hope as the story goes on you make it more unique.

3yr
God_of_Nothingness
God_of_NothingnessLv13

Quite creative immitation of Author's POV. Though it's just too much of a copy, all the series of events that occur in the novel are put in here with just slight modifications. I hope author can put his own plot instead of just copy pasting and replacing terms...

2yr
Ayush_Saini_5568
Ayush_Saini_5568Lv3

the story is good but where are you author😭😭

1yr
Eula_Simp01
Eula_Simp01Lv4

i can barely get past the cringe of the story but then u introduce Eleonore and yup can't bear it anymore she is just to dilusional. and that is the limit of cringe i can bear... plz tell me if we have to see her more in later chapter otherwise I'm out. if you are making a blatant copy of Author pov atleast make it good

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YellowGreenleaves
YellowGreenleavesLv1

❤️Dear Auther~ its my first/ and fav novel.... but its been 2/3 weeks without update still i m waiting patiently plz update soon/when ur free🤧 i am missing zero n hero 😟 .... stay healthy and safe~ giving u blessings from my home~

2yr
LeonCrombell
LeonCrombellLv2

I have read it up to 400 chapters and it is very good story🤩

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