Hello readers, Author here. This is the first novel I have written. This novel includes what I would in a novel where MC has the memory of this Earth. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.

a very good novel and an interesting plot keep it up bro don't stop and update regularly I am super sure that this novel has a lot of potential keep up the good work

I'll keep it short, after going through 40 chapters, I still no nothing about our Mc, not in the sense of his family and friends, but why he thinks how he thinks, why does his morals A B C, why is this his train of thought, who is he really, and this is problematic because then it has no essence, the mc has no character. This novel can still be saved however, but before you can build the world, I suggest you a singular person, our main character, for if the lens are dull, then the picture will so as well.

I am loving the chapters you're posting bro. The world development is good and the characters are freaking amazing. I would like lots and lots of chapters in the future. It has limitless potential. Keep up the good work 👍

I would rate this story higher but there are a couple problems. The writing quality is a bit bad and would improve A lot by only putting it through a grammer checker. Another major problem is that it is almost a carbon copy of the Authers POV with some differences. It currently only has 30 chapters but i hope as the story goes on you make it more unique.

Quite creative immitation of Author's POV. Though it's just too much of a copy, all the series of events that occur in the novel are put in here with just slight modifications. I hope author can put his own plot instead of just copy pasting and replacing terms...

the story is good but where are you author😭😭

❤️Dear Auther~ its my first/ and fav novel.... but its been 2/3 weeks without update still i m waiting patiently plz update soon/when ur free🤧 i am missing zero n hero 😟 .... stay healthy and safe~ giving u blessings from my home~

I have read it up to 400 chapters and it is very good story🤩