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Ayush_Saini_5568Lv311mth
2024-01-28 19:32

the story is good but where are you author😭😭

Parallel Memory

SomDxD
4.3
513 Chs

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SomDxD
SomDxDAuthor

Hello readers, Author here. This is the first novel I have written. This novel includes what I would in a novel where MC has the memory of this Earth. Treat this review as a Q&A page. Comment your questions, I will try to answer as long as it does not contain spoilers.

2yr

SHiRa155
SHiRa155Lv4

a very good novel and an interesting plot keep it up bro don't stop and update regularly I am super sure that this novel has a lot of potential keep up the good work

2yr
Dark_Eterium
Dark_EteriumLv3

I'll keep it short, after going through 40 chapters, I still no nothing about our Mc, not in the sense of his family and friends, but why he thinks how he thinks, why does his morals A B C, why is this his train of thought, who is he really, and this is problematic because then it has no essence, the mc has no character. This novel can still be saved however, but before you can build the world, I suggest you a singular person, our main character, for if the lens are dull, then the picture will so as well.

2yr
ShrikantSahu
ShrikantSahuLv3

I am loving the chapters you're posting bro. The world development is good and the characters are freaking amazing. I would like lots and lots of chapters in the future. It has limitless potential. Keep up the good work 👍

2yr
Dzima
DzimaLv15

I would rate this story higher but there are a couple problems. The writing quality is a bit bad and would improve A lot by only putting it through a grammer checker. Another major problem is that it is almost a carbon copy of the Authers POV with some differences. It currently only has 30 chapters but i hope as the story goes on you make it more unique.

2yr
God_of_Nothingness
God_of_NothingnessLv13

Quite creative immitation of Author's POV. Though it's just too much of a copy, all the series of events that occur in the novel are put in here with just slight modifications. I hope author can put his own plot instead of just copy pasting and replacing terms...

2yr
Eula_Simp01
Eula_Simp01Lv4

i can barely get past the cringe of the story but then u introduce Eleonore and yup can't bear it anymore she is just to dilusional. and that is the limit of cringe i can bear... plz tell me if we have to see her more in later chapter otherwise I'm out. if you are making a blatant copy of Author pov atleast make it good

2yr
YellowGreenleaves
YellowGreenleavesLv1

❤️Dear Auther~ its my first/ and fav novel.... but its been 2/3 weeks without update still i m waiting patiently plz update soon/when ur free🤧 i am missing zero n hero 😟 .... stay healthy and safe~ giving u blessings from my home~

2yr
LeonCrombell
LeonCrombellLv2

I have read it up to 400 chapters and it is very good story🤩

1yr
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