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Hunter x Hunter: A Selfish Wish (COMPLETED)

Auteur: HolyJoker
Anime et bandes dessinées
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Synopsis

Being reborn as average in a world full of extraordinary people isn't something that he ever thought possible. He thought that he was reborn into the past... not in the world of... Hunter x Hunter. Follow the journey of the man who simply wants to be the strongest, is that too much for him to ask? Where is his cheat? There is none. Where is his monstrous talent? It isn't there. But he knows that the world owes him nothing, so he too will set on his Hunt... for power... Selfish MC/ Playful MC/ Evil MC DISCLAIMER: -All copyrighted content is the property of its respective owner(s).

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# ACTION
# ADVENTURE
# REINCARNATION
Chapter 1Reborn in a world of hunters 

Chapter 1

Title: Reborn in a world of hunters 

Dying is a new feeling of anger for me.

I was about to go to college for engineering with a scholarship.

I had it all planned out for college. I was going to make some connections there knowing some people getting the best grades and using those people that I made connections with to get a good job and then I will plan to go higher and higher until I touch the sky.

I had plans to get rich quick. I even had a family... the family that gave up a lot for me, they needed me and I just had to go and die. DAMN IT, DAMN IT, DAMN IT.

....

Then I feel something weird and look around the void and I turn around and see an eye as gigantic as a mountain. I -I -I am not going to lie I am scared.

I just kept walking backward away from it as fast and as stealthily as I can. Then as I am doing so I keep looking at the darkness thing  with just an eye and I see a gigantic mouth open I can't even see its end jut rows and rows of sharp teeth. A lot of tongues come out of the mouth and towards me.

THIS IS TERRIFYING...

 As I think this I immediately turn around and run in darkness or whatever, I don't even look at what I am stepping in. I keep running, and running, and running.... I don't know how long I have been running but I see a circle made of light about my size... in front of me… so I directly jump into it and then I lose consciousness.

The next time I wake up I see a bright light in front of my face and hear someone or something say…

"It's a boy mis Miller."

I suddenly feel someone grabbing me!?...

"My baby, my baby boy."

Ah I get it now... after I hear that I immediately start crying as I have assessed the situation.

I hear someone with a hard manly voice say.

" MY SON, MY SON... ARE YOU OKAY HONEY."

Then the voice… I hear the womanly voice from before talking in an ushered tone answer.

"Yes, yes just stop screaming you are making the baby cry."

…..

Just like this six months pass.. after being here for such a time. Life is really boring. I was born in Dolle Harbor in 1969. I don't know where I am but I am in the past… soooo that means a lot of money making opportunities waiting for me. I am about to overuse my future knowledge as much as I can...

By the way my name is Jax Miller and my parents names are Jerry Miller 41 years old black hair and eyes and good looking man that works in a Loan Bank. 

Beth Miller 28 years old brown hair and brown eyes with a pretty face. Yeah I know, quite the age difference there.

And there is me... I seem like I am going to be good looking with black hair and brown eyes with a baby face? I don't know, to me babies just look almost all the same.

…

Finally I reach the age of one year old and...

OK OK RED ALERT I JUST HEARD FATHER SAY SOMETHING BIZARRE.

He was talking to me about Hunters… at first I didn't think anything special.

But he said that when he was younger he wanted to be a hunter or whatever, I was only half listening but when I asked about specifically why he wanted to be a hunter when he earns more money and easier as a loan man, I asked him in gibberish baby talk obviously.

But then he started explaining Hunter adventures and stories types of them like: black list hunters, gourmet hunters etc..

I almost went full panic mode but I pushed it at the back of my mind and forced myself to calm down. Then as soon as night time came I went into bed and I started practicing meditation. 

Well then... an extreme change of plans must come about. I must meditate to start my training now.

 I AM IN THE WORLD OF HUNTER X HUNTER.

....

Then as I reach two years old, I already started preparing for the future, the main thing I need is access to Nen... I keep meditating but I still haven't awakened it yet. 

I am kind of disappointed that I don't have the kind of talent the MC's do but I still keep trying, not giving up.

After all… I have patience, because I am born way before the main characters.

 I now started to run around Dolle Harbor to get to know things around but mainly for me to exercise my body.

Of course I don't go into shady, easy to get kidnapped alleys and areas. I always run during daylight... and when there is at least a dozen people around.

....

Finally as I am at the age of three... I have had some success in Nen...

YES I DID IT I GOT MY NEN.

 I feel the warm mucus feeling around me. t

Then I...  am even able to naturally close my nodes from leaking any aura until I can cover myself in it and not let any go away.

....

 

As another year passes, I notice something strange... it seems like I have nowhere near the talent of Gon and Killua.

I still need to keep training my TEN...  ahhhhh the hard work I have to put through just because I don't have the talent.

 Well then anyway I now have control over TEN and I still keep training my body. I now even go and help the people around carrying their stuff. 

And keep acting like a kid. I am thinking after getting a bit stronger I will run away from home and go train somewhere. I won't really miss my new parents. I was never really connect with them after all I did possess their baby... I mean if I didn't do so... then how was I able to use Nen with my average soul from my past life, and if they knew they would definitely not react nicely. But I don't blame them for it either and am even a little grateful to them for creating my new body.

Even so the only people I will ever truly love are my family in my last world but at least they are safe in that one. 

I also learned how to read and started convincing my father to buy me medical books. I gave him a reason because I want to become a doctor to save people. He reluctantly did so.

…..

At the age of five, I am finally able to train other basic Nen techniques... I have now started training ZETSU to suppress my aura to hide from other nen users. I still train my body. 

Now that I am ready to find out my category of nen. I didn't try it sooner because it would have been useless to me with my talent... it would have only got me distracted.

I am in my room and ready to do so. 

I put down a glass of water with a leaf on top and I then run some nen through it.

That is when...

....

AUTHOR NOTE:

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DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Sup! Came over from the Naruto FF with za Immortal Yami. I have some pretty high expectations for a ruthless mc though I wouldn't mind a different scenario. Welp, I have high expectations so I'ma give it a read. P.S. I'll do a proper review after maybe 10 chaps? I'll probably forget to do that though 😂

4yr

Noken
NokenLv13

Reading this just feels like the whole story is pointless. The MC is an overpowered psychopath that has no feelings and gets everything he wants without struggle. All of the good stories have a goal that drives the MC forward and gives him strengh to overcome the obstacles, and there’s no such thing here. He wants power, but why? He doesn’t seem to care about anything, there’s no romance, he doesn’t have friends, no family, it doesn’t matter who lives or dies. Overall, the MC just feels empty, like he’s not even a person, and this is so boring to read. Then the author uses the excuse of being “evil” to justify the MC’s lack of personality... I like evil characters, and I love to read things from the villain’s perspective, but this was not the case here. There’s no character development, he’s just a bland character without emotions. Enough about the MC, now let’s talk a bit about the story itself. It’s clear that the author has a lot of knowledge about Hunter x Hunter, the grammar is good, and these are definitely good points in any fanfiction. The abilities he came up for the MC are very original and it made a cool image in my head. The pace is definitely a problem... It starts slow, then we have massive timeskip and suddenly the MC abused the hell out of his ability and he’s now the strongest being on the continent. Like, wtf? I almost dropped it there. I understand that some people find “training arcs” boring, and it must be even worse to write one, but this is simply ridiculous. It feels like he didn’t even have to work for it. Now the MC is extremely overpowered, more powerful than any character in the anime/manga, and the only “goal” he has is to get even more powerful... All the action we got so far is he beating people that are a thousand times weaker than himself. There’s no one who can challenge or be a threat to him. And this is not fun to read at all. Author, all of this is simply my opinion, and I believe that constructive criticism is the key to improve at everything we do. I’ve read your Naruto story too, and if I were to review it, my feedback would be basically the same.

4yr
DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Grammar: 4.69 Uploading Speed: 5 Story Development: 5 Character Design: 5 World Background: 5 Uploading Speed and World Background I don't think I really have to explain these two. The uploading Speed is relatively stable at 1 chap/day. The world background is pretty self explanatory, Hunter x Hunter. Though I do want to praise the author for adding the "valley of death", an imaginary place that did not exist in canon. It was smoothly integrated into the story which I like. Grammar The grammar is pretty "bormal", meaning it's pretty good, so I have no problems there. The Author just tends to be lazy from time to time... Like a "bormal" person. Story Development I think the story development is pretty good, the pacing is neither too fast that the readers can't catch up nor too slow that the readers get bored in 5 seconds. The increase/decrease in strength of the MC seems pretty logical and well thought out (to me at least). Character Design Ohh~ Now we are getting to the part I like. The main character is smart which is proven by how he is in college at the mere age of 15. The main character doesn't show much of a "bond" with his parents which is giving me Yami vibes and apparently also has a large junk COUGH* COUGH* Kona... He is also pretty ruthless which is shown by how he kills some hunters with no hesitation for the continuation of science! (lol no, he was just experimenting)Overall, I am getting Yami vibes so I like it. Personal Thoughts Although it is quite a pity the mc doesn't have much talent for nen as a child, I like how the MC opened up a path for himself to get stronger exponentially. The "system" ability is pretty broken but it also has its own limitations which I do think will lead to him losing a limb one day. Alluka is apparently a guy so my disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined. Lastly, BEGONE YOU COMPUTER SIMPS!

4yr
Maurz
MaurzLv4

The Hunter X Hunter background information is good, but I have to be honest, the writing and grammar is not. Increases in power for the MC are not incremental, and a bit too sudden. There's not really much happening story-wise, and the pacing is pretty strange... There's nothing that really invests me in the character that is the MC, and the only reason I would have any care for the rest of the characters in this is because I have seen the anime. Not the worst... but I do definitely believe this could use a rewrite.

4yr
Ali_Makles
Ali_MaklesLv2

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4yr
Ryan_Winston
Ryan_WinstonLv3

Révéler le spoiler

4yr
Mlnt
MlntLv4

I hope he is as ruthless as Yami, there are no good Hunter X Hunter fan-fics. Will you continue to post chapters of this like, Dream to immortality or will I have to join your patreon?

4yr
ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv4

Garbage garbage garbage. So bad it doesn't even deserve an review. Awakens nen at 3 years old by doing absolutely nothing. next sentences: I don't have much talent. :( Author is a braindead moron.

2yr
hoboman420
hoboman420Lv14

Révéler le spoiler

4yr
God_Mode_ep
God_Mode_epLv2

Not much to say, the story premise looks promising and if this one is anything like your previous fic... Then this is going to be within the top ten very soon. Good Luck.

4yr
Fullmetal
FullmetalLv6

This kind of reminds me of warlock of the magus world, MC is cold and ruthless and will do anything to become stronger. The only reason i rated it like this is because there's almost no character development. Time skip after time skip. I don't even understand how people cared about Mikasa, we never knew anything about her, the same can be said about the main character. Author even specifically said that *** scenes even happened but he never wrote about them. He never gives any of his characters any time for us to care about them. Understandably people would have much bigger reaction about Mikasa if we actually read about her for 15-20 chapters and the life between her and MC that they had for years, but this is completely skipped. Since we don't care for her, it doesn't matter if she's dead or not . I really don't understand why author is rushing this story so much, From what i heard he basically finished it without even reaching any big amount of chapters. Basically just anime had 148 episodes, the 2011 version, yet he is going to finish his novel at like 60-70 chapters that are quite short. That is only possible because there's so many time skips and no character development, there's no real reason to care about MC at all, if he died at the end i wouldn't mind it at all. The reason most people loved HxH is because we see Gon grow up slowly and we love quite a few other characters. Heck even Phantom troupe had its appeal to people who watched the show, you can see how well characters are developed there, you could know so many details about each one of the phantom troupe members, so many of their quirks and they are actually antagonists that show up in an ARC then they sometimes show up later but nothing important happens between them.

4yr
Midou_Givanci
Midou_GivanciLv2

Why are there so many vulnerable idiots in the chat who cry for some strange reason. The author did everything right, and it should be so. If Mikasa became the main character's love interest, it would be extremely disappointing. How infuriated me are the stories where they take characters from different fanfiction and all after a couple of chapters make them vulnerable harem owners, who think in only one place.

4yr
jhomz00
jhomz00Lv5

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4yr
Nick_Savage
Nick_SavageLv3

Révéler le spoiler

4yr
daoist_KoOlAiD
daoist_KoOlAiDLv14

Amazing book...good author...me in the comments...whats there not to like. It won't hurt you physically to read it so in the words of a wise wise man...why not.😤😁

4yr
Novel_Guru
Novel_GuruLv4

hey buddy, nice story And pls keep writing such types of mc types stories :->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->:->

4yr
Immortal_Lover
Immortal_LoverLv4

Auto 5 star if it is HolyJoker's story😏😏 The most beautiful thing about your works is that the story is very very realistic. I specially likes your main characters. Yami is still the best🤣🤣

4yr
MatheusHenrique
MatheusHenriqueLv4

Wow , how cold .... I love it . .................................................................................................................................................................l.................

4yr
GodSpeed28
GodSpeed28Lv4

Probably the best HunterXHunter you will find on this website. The antagonist!MC is my cup of tea, and that is why I enjoy this story. If anyone else like an MC that isn't some goody-two-shoes, you will probably like it. While chapters are short, he uploads daily so it evens out. Go ahead and give this a go.

4yr
Mr_Hozuki
Mr_HozukiLv5

finally HxH fan fic................................................................... hope its good novel.........................................................

4yr

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