This kind of reminds me of warlock of the magus world, MC is cold and ruthless and will do anything to become stronger. The only reason i rated it like this is because there's almost no character development. Time skip after time skip. I don't even understand how people cared about Mikasa, we never knew anything about her, the same can be said about the main character. Author even specifically said that *** scenes even happened but he never wrote about them. He never gives any of his characters any time for us to care about them. Understandably people would have much bigger reaction about Mikasa if we actually read about her for 15-20 chapters and the life between her and MC that they had for years, but this is completely skipped. Since we don't care for her, it doesn't matter if she's dead or not . I really don't understand why author is rushing this story so much, From what i heard he basically finished it without even reaching any big amount of chapters. Basically just anime had 148 episodes, the 2011 version, yet he is going to finish his novel at like 60-70 chapters that are quite short. That is only possible because there's so many time skips and no character development, there's no real reason to care about MC at all, if he died at the end i wouldn't mind it at all. The reason most people loved HxH is because we see Gon grow up slowly and we love quite a few other characters. Heck even Phantom troupe had its appeal to people who watched the show, you can see how well characters are developed there, you could know so many details about each one of the phantom troupe members, so many of their quirks and they are actually antagonists that show up in an ARC then they sometimes show up later but nothing important happens between them.
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Why I did so many time skips was so I could finish the story because this was an old idea.
It's just my OCD thing, where when I start something I MUST finish it.๐คฃ๐คฃ
This wasn't a good idea since the moment I made the MC OP so fast. But at the same time I didn't want to nerf him or something like that.
hope this makes sense.๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Its hard to write with OP mc but i don't know if you watched Overlord anime or read the novel but its possible to write about characters enough so that we care about them no matter how strong they are. I am just hoping your next story will not have that many time skips and will have character development, so that we actually care what is happening to them.
Don't worry about that, I plan to have my characteras all developed. During while I was writing this story, especially the first thirty or so chapters, I was a total noob.
