Novel_Guru

author san u high?, the fk going on, this fic is too messed up.

cool, no issues.. looking forward for plot.

honestly I give it solid 4/5, the only issue I have is currently is turning towards freebies, MC only promised 5 surgery now they take MC got a sucker. Also author san, why don't you remove Obito in some mission, so MC removes his sister Rin getting targeted, imagine the amount off of MC and minato, since now no one there's to share info, No nine tailed night minato keeps being hokage. also maybe no Uchiha massacre. but this costs fore knowledge, but overall no major impact on MC. MC too will remain in dark cause it will save a lot of trouble.

this too might work, if MC actively keeps his info under table, like finish off those who know got info on him and in future when given chance finish off hiruzen and danzo too along with paperwork, so to gain edge in 4th ninja war

i got no issue here, but when you include mc instant mastery cheat things change, MC priority should be Time and opportunities to change fate like teacher in academy or opening shop in konoha or something else but thing that bring change in konoha. now that he is anbu, he got less tym more missions, less autonomy, travel more hence less opportunities to change fate in konoha. and given enough tym MC will easily become madara lvl without even techniques from seal book. my point is Mc should prioritise his future self more and long term benefit rather then impulsive short term gain like multiple shadow clone techniques. this I feel is too major blunder on mC side. well I will continue 30-40 chaps, it's too early for me to draw conclusions.

As much I would like to rate it 5 star, I feel plot is forced and MC choices are illogical, MC got instant mastery cheat, on some mission outside fire nation nearly died to ambush. then his approx strength is exposed to hokage, meaning he is 24x7 doubtful/not trusted and in surveillance a huge loss but still considering his cheat it's huge win. now he join anbu without delay, maybe he should have postponed it when he had genuine jonin strength now he lost his mission autonomy meaning regular travel to dangerous mission, more exposure to his strength. now hurizen had him matchup with jonin, meaning his current strength would be regularly exposed at certain intervals like every 3-4 months, and then due to leeks other would know his growth rate, before even he reached madara lvl, his strength would be completely transparent to enemies. also he is now completely under hiruzen thumb and so his intelligence under danzo too.. if they want him gone it's easy like pakura from sand village. this fic feels like Chinese due to these forced choices. author san if it's SI, please fix the plot. MC got no automy at all.

what Abt zampakto, it's soul blade..

yeah gud decision

Well, this was going gud, until MC decides to go soft and -999 aura himself and tells his powers and ability to others... sigh, this is what usally happens to AI or chinese fics

Come on!, the only difference naruto fiction didn't have gege.