Although, the grammar is quite good I can't rate it any higher than a 3.6 because for one the protagonist is actually a simp and two he isn't really a "Darth". Like bro actually healed the girl who tried to kill him and fix her image of him. How does that make any sense?
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*spoiler alert**spoiler alert* Dear Reader, I want to share some additional information about my character and plot. Hassan, is in a situation where he does not possess the knowledge and skills necessary to pilot spaceships, and he is in a different universe where the rules and conditions are different from his usual reality. Instead, he decides to use his intelligence and resources to find other ways to accomplish his goals, including obtaining ransom and finding potential allies in the Jedi council. In this way, his character is more anti-hero than villain, and it is his intentions and moral dilemmas that give the story additional layers of depth. He also decides to let Tann live so that she can be his assistant in controlling the spaceship and holonet. I hope these additional details have helped clarify my character's personality and motivations. Thank you for your support and interest in my story, and I look forward to your continued participation and questions!
everything you said doesn't change anything, feels more like an excuse.
Vandalizer:*spoiler alert**spoiler alert* Dear Reader, I want to share some additional information about my character and plot. Hassan, is in a situation where he does not possess the knowledge and skills necessary to pilot spaceships, and he is in a different universe where the rules and conditions are different from his usual reality. Instead, he decides to use his intelligence and resources to find other ways to accomplish his goals, including obtaining ransom and finding potential allies in the Jedi council. In this way, his character is more anti-hero than villain, and it is his intentions and moral dilemmas that give the story additional layers of depth. He also decides to let Tann live so that she can be his assistant in controlling the spaceship and holonet. I hope these additional details have helped clarify my character's personality and motivations. Thank you for your support and interest in my story, and I look forward to your continued participation and questions!
You make lots of excuses without actually answering criticism. Stop acting like chat gpt and give an actual response.
Vandalizer:*spoiler alert**spoiler alert* Dear Reader, I want to share some additional information about my character and plot. Hassan, is in a situation where he does not possess the knowledge and skills necessary to pilot spaceships, and he is in a different universe where the rules and conditions are different from his usual reality. Instead, he decides to use his intelligence and resources to find other ways to accomplish his goals, including obtaining ransom and finding potential allies in the Jedi council. In this way, his character is more anti-hero than villain, and it is his intentions and moral dilemmas that give the story additional layers of depth. He also decides to let Tann live so that she can be his assistant in controlling the spaceship and holonet. I hope these additional details have helped clarify my character's personality and motivations. Thank you for your support and interest in my story, and I look forward to your continued participation and questions!
