Marvel: The Foundation

The only problem I see with the story is the mc and the characters, 1- the mc seems to care little or nothing about his past and inexplicably, in less than 2 hours he had already adapted not only to his new world, but also to his new body and life, as if his past life as a normal person had never existed. 2- the characters have little or no respect towards the mc, supposedly the mc is the leader of the scp corporation, but no one respects him, everyone treats him as if he were an acquaintance or friend, instead of his boss. 3- the author says that the members of the scp corporation who are summoned by the system are loyal to the mc, but then the mc says that he has to be careful with what he says with those same members of the foundation so that they do not betray So what are we left with? Are they loyal to the MC or not? Those are the problems of fan-fic for me, if the author corrected them I think the level of fan-fic would rise quite a bit compared to other fan-fics.

Ive seen something similiar before but can't remember of the books translator stopped or bad translated but this one is good i like it for now

The author is inserting things that should be tagged like gender-bending. That whole GB plot point made no sense. Now with the author having the MC flirt with dudes, it's getting very weird. . One star for not tagging the story properly.

MC is just a slave to the system, too Chinese stuff which is probably MTL, and he doesn't even seem to be a respected boss, just an acquaintance or something, if you guys like stuff like that then its good unless that then nah it's worthless ff

Revela spoiler

Everything was good until The MC got Gender Bend after that it was just going downhill

The MAN talks with Black Widow every so often and he met Black Cat and has a house full of maids who have been mentioned to be well 'Trained' and not even once was there any sexual tension, never, I assumed it was because the author didn't want to go into those areas but now they come with changing their biological gender and appearing naked and wet in front of Tony, sweet talks and kiss him... What comes next? Is he going to Ntr Peggy? If this was genderbent, Yaoi or LGBT+, I'm not complaining, just add the tags so I wouldn't be bothered.

Your writing quality has gone way down so just proof read your chapters because it’s becoming very hard to read

This may be one of the best scp fanfic that I have seen releated to the nature of setting up a found and maintaining it. All though, the scp are seemingly easily contained which can be jarring to read but that could be explained due to it being early in the fanfic’s infancy and or because it is focused on setting up roots in the world. Thanks for the work, author.

another gpt trash

If you will make mc a woman and make him learn to be a woman you better add the tag of yaoi or lgbtq+×/zs at such a waste of time at least you could say at the synopsis genderbend or something

This is actually the most decent SCP/ Marvel fanfiction there's not a lot of it and the ones that exist are not really that good especially the Chinese translated novels I read something they have the same premise to this the name was American Comics: The Containment Foundation From Scratch in that novel I don't like the part that he got too op too fast and the dude was too childish and selfish he didn't care if people got killed also hate the harem bulls*** especially saying beautiful country instead of saying America or USA he was disrespecting my boy Nick by calling him a black marinated egg 😵😢

While this fanfic was really good in the beginning with a fast paced in the timeline and very decent writing and with excellent grammar the new chapters fill slow and the writing quality has clearly gone down, from what I’ve seen the author puts out to many chapters to fast that he doesn’t even seem to correct the errors in the chapters he makes and some of the stuff feels like it’s being by AI to behonest and though the story is good still it clearly has gone hill fast. And even with what 45 chapters it’s not even at the New York invasion and there have clearly been filler chapters which I forgot to mention.

I love SCP, it’s quite sad there’s only a few fanfics on them.

This novel is bloody dull. I have never read a novel so idiotic. First of all, there is no element to show this is marvel. Two, this novel is nothing more than the endless rambling of the author with little to no marvel action. This is disappointing.

Revela spoiler

ALERTA ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️ gender bender / cambio de genero Es una buena historia pero en los últimos capítulos el autor comenzó a cambiar el género del protagonista, hasta ahora no es muy grave pero no parece que se vaya a detener.

This book was an incredibly frustrating read. First, let’s start with the awful grammar. It was riddled with run-on sentences, strange punctuation, and awkward phrasing that made it almost unreadable. It felt like I was reading something that skipped the editing process entirely. As for the main character, he was supposed to be mature and aloof, but instead, he came off as childish and whiny. Every time a serious situation arose, he would respond with petty complaints or irrational decisions, making it impossible to take him seriously. It was hard to believe this was the protagonist who was supposed to carry the story. His lack of emotional depth and constant immature reactions made him more irritating than engaging. On top of that, the book relied way too heavily on AI to drive the plot. Instead of letting the characters solve problems on their own, the author threw in AI as a solution to everything. It felt lazy and overdone, as if the writer had no idea how to naturally resolve conflicts. The excessive use of futuristic technology didn't add anything substantial to the story, and in fact, it made the world feel hollow. To make matters worse, the author went into agonizing detail in places where none was needed. There were entire chapters devoted to describing irrelevant things like the layout of a room or the specifications of a gadget. Yet, when it came to character development or crucial plot points, those were skimmed over. With terrible grammar, a main character who acts like a child when he's supposed to be mature, and an overreliance on AI, this book was a chore to get through. Definitely not worth the read.

A very good story but all the gender bending themes and homosexual tension left me without any kind of warning or label, I'm just going to sadly abandon it with my wasted time.

I was looking for a FF and FOUND GOLD. Such an interesting fic and the concept of The Foundation , the whole organization building is cool .. cough out more chapter author