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I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

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BURN ME ALIVE IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE THIS BOOK...AFTER READING THAT IS Regressing back in time after sacrificing his life for someone undeserving someone who didn’t even shed a tear after his death just total blank. The person he begged for love rejected him every single time. Now, he returns to when he was 18 again. Looking at her face, he wants to try again, to fall in love with her once more, to want to... but no, he no longer wants to feel that pain again. Some feelings never change, but you have to leave them behind, right? And one life should be enough to try. He made a commitment to never love her again. This life is his chance to live for himself. But who knew he wasn’t the only one regressed? The ultimate black heart curse is broken... and time reverses. Avey: “Lucy, can we.” Tears in her eyes. Lucy: Looking blankly at him. Avey: “Can’t you at least give me one chance?” Lucian: Silently looking at her. what about other people who hurt him too: mother, sister, friend and ofc her Will he give up on love for his own peace, or will he be too afraid to feel that pain again? --- Additional Tags: Regression, Time Travel, Yandere, CEO Girl, Mafia, Family Conflicts, Mother’s Failure, Revenge, Heartbreak, Sacrifices, Unworthy Love, Beautiful Love Story, Strong Characters, Loki ---

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(TLDR) If you like stories that are angsty with emotional turmoil and anguish; You'll like this. I have only so far read up to the 34th chapter; (That's when premium starts) but with I have read so far I'm rather pleased with. Writing Quality: 4/5 Some grammatical errors and parts of the story where immersion might break due to errors. But overall very good. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Contracted (Meaning stable updates) Story Development: 3/5 As I have only read up to the 34th chapter I don't know much; but with what I've seen with so far I'm pleased with. The beginning of the story was a bit unique and should've been developed a bit more (my opinion) before the plot had actually started. It was still very well set up so kudos to you author. (I'm also a fan of the genre of novels that this novel takes inspiration from so I love what they're doing here.) Character Design: 2/5 (This also might be dependent on your own personal opinion.) As much as I love the Tragedy and Angst; when the protagonist and the cast are having interactions with each other with the Unique Twist that the story has, it makes the theme of hidden burdens and regrets seem forced. Also the other thing that brings it down massively to me is the Flawed nature of the Characters (Logically Flawed) Otherwise the author did a great job at making the MC and cast people with character flaws. Overall I have a love/hate for the MC. Still very enjoyable to read about nonetheless. World Background: 4/5 Pretty good world building. Slowly but surely as you progress through the story you get to understand the world better. Thank you if you read this :) Overall very much so a "hidden gem" to some. Depending on your taste you'll either like it or not. It definitely has parts that might affect you emotionally. There are also many other stories that have a similar setting to this one if you like this story. SPOILER The logical flaw that I disliked is the fact that when everyone returned the the past, how they just somehow don't realize that the other characters might have regressed too. It seems like a major plot hole as these character's actions sometimes directly give away that they've regressed. But I also think its a good way to enhance the emotional turmoil within the story but it also makes it a bit forced. (But as a fan of angst I personally love them not knowing.)

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