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2024-11-21 16:36

I don't have too much of a problem with the book, the plot and everything is spot on except the main character. The main character that is lucien is poorly written. How can someone involved in the making of one of the most feared gangster groups in the world not be able to control their emotions when they are sent back to being a teenager. Worst of all he claims to have God tier acting skills bestowed by a sysytem but can't hide his emotions well

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well...he isn't a gangster....well they are not him therogically and well of acting...how much a person can act when there is nothing too😭 thanks for reading reader kun...wish you liked it😭🫂✌️

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At the beginning i had high hopes for this stor. But even now almost 190 chapters in, the MC Lucian is still completely and utterly useless ! He supposedly has some great skills that should make himpretty much super human but the development is just disappointing . He can't stand up for himself, he just wants to run away from his problems but decides against it, he still lives at home with his family who also tortured him in his first life, he doesn't let the only 2 real friends he had help him and pushe them away and even the yandere who supposedly loves him more than anything and said that she would protect him from those who hurt him, just stands on the sidelines and bully's him even more!!! Why am i srill reading this novel you might ask, to be honest i don't know anymore... I was hoping that he might actually change, or that the yandere would do something or that anybody would get punished but no... nothing and just now chapter 184-186... WARNING: SPOILER!!!! the women who played the most with him in his first life and drove him to suicide just proclaimed in front of the entire high society, the crown prince who wants to marry this women and another powerful man who has the biggest plot armor and supposedly is the real main character of this world this novel plays in, that she is pregnant with our MC's child... his sister went straight for him and questioned him if it's true his mother who wants to be understanding just accepts it his supposedly yandere does nothing whatsoever, even though she is the crown princess and could have taken care of the situation with one sentence tje Girl responsible for this sh*t show is disappointed that he doesn't see her proclamation of love and instead of apologizing or atleast doing the right thing which would be to tell the truth so that not everyone believes him to be the scumbag, she is now thinking about killing herself because he said he hates her... and now her parents want to talk to him about something that we don't know yet... But the worst thing in all of this, he, Lucian, our MC feels bad that he told Avey, the women responsible for this, that he hates her........ CAN YOU F*CKING BELIEVE THIS HORSESH*t!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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