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DiligentHater
DiligentHaterLv104mth
2024-12-05 12:05

Decent writing wasted on an extremely adolescent story, dramatized at an astronomically absurd level (not compatible with the low depth of the plot) and a narcissistic, frightening and sociopathic protagonist. I don't blame anyone who enjoyed this, as long as they're at least 16 or younger.

I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

LazyDiablo
4.4
297 Chs

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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

I mean well it depends... people love different kinds theres no age for genre ...its fun writing and reading this actually people really enjoyed it I don't blame some people that their taste is just different

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DiligentHater
DiligentHaterLv10

Damn, you're a nice guy. I hate being a hater of a nice guy

LazyDiablo:I mean well it depends... people love different kinds theres no age for genre ...its fun writing and reading this actually people really enjoyed it I don't blame some people that their taste is just different
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

don't worry just enjoy it wish you like it...if not apologies ill try better next time

DiligentHater:Damn, you're a nice guy. I hate being a hater of a nice guy
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Polzevatel_Google
Polzevatel_GoogleLv14

Hello author, I have a question: how long will the novel be? (What will be the number of chapters?)

LazyDiablo:don't worry just enjoy it wish you like it...if not apologies ill try better next time
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

honestly i have no idea but surely i will try to make it longer then 300 at least

Polzevatel_Google:Hello author, I have a question: how long will the novel be? (What will be the number of chapters?)
4mth
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Polzevatel_Google
Polzevatel_GoogleLv14

And how will you decide who the main character will stay with? Thanks for the answers

LazyDiablo:honestly i have no idea but surely i will try to make it longer then 300 at least
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

depends on so many things...love is complicated but surely...it wont be easy

Polzevatel_Google:And how will you decide who the main character will stay with? Thanks for the answers
4mth
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Polzevatel_Google
Polzevatel_GoogleLv14

Thanks for the answer

LazyDiablo:depends on so many things...love is complicated but surely...it wont be easy
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

no worries 💖

Polzevatel_Google:Thanks for the answer
4mth
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The_Ram_TS
The_Ram_TSLv3

El género no es el culpable, sino la trama.

LazyDiablo:I mean well it depends... people love different kinds theres no age for genre ...its fun writing and reading this actually people really enjoyed it I don't blame some people that their taste is just different
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Ricardo_M_Carrillo
Ricardo_M_CarrilloLv14

I love the story, even if it feels like it just started I love it, I can’t wait for more, i normally never comment but i really do like this story so far.

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I'm really enjoying this novel, nowadays all novels seem the same, but fortunately this one is a needle in a haystack and I'm loving every chapter. My English is bad sorry rs, 😁🇧🇷

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I've read up to chapter 33 and you're story is such a tearjerker. Please tell me he finally gets a happy ending.

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Synopsis honestly couldn’t have done a better job at getting me to read this story the is one big mess of emotions it’s hard not to be captivated hope author doesn’t stop this anytime soon and mc gets the good ending he deserves keep it up author!

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deorikson03
deorikson03Lv3

I don't have too much of a problem with the book, the plot and everything is spot on except the main character. The main character that is lucien is poorly written. How can someone involved in the making of one of the most feared gangster groups in the world not be able to control their emotions when they are sent back to being a teenager. Worst of all he claims to have God tier acting skills bestowed by a sysytem but can't hide his emotions well

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Sagebigi
SagebigiLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Slothfulmonk
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