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DiligentHaterLv102mth
2024-12-05 04:05

Decent writing wasted on an extremely adolescent story, dramatized at an astronomically absurd level (not compatible with the low depth of the plot) and a narcissistic, frightening and sociopathic protagonist. I don't blame anyone who enjoyed this, as long as they're at least 16 or younger.

I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

LazyDiablo
3.9
268 Chs

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LazyDiabloAuthor

I mean well it depends... people love different kinds theres no age for genre ...its fun writing and reading this actually people really enjoyed it I don't blame some people that their taste is just different

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DiligentHaterLv10

Damn, you're a nice guy. I hate being a hater of a nice guy

LazyDiablo:I mean well it depends... people love different kinds theres no age for genre ...its fun writing and reading this actually people really enjoyed it I don't blame some people that their taste is just different
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LazyDiabloAuthor

don't worry just enjoy it wish you like it...if not apologies ill try better next time

DiligentHater:Damn, you're a nice guy. I hate being a hater of a nice guy
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Polzevatel_GoogleLv14

Hello author, I have a question: how long will the novel be? (What will be the number of chapters?)

LazyDiablo:don't worry just enjoy it wish you like it...if not apologies ill try better next time
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LazyDiabloAuthor

honestly i have no idea but surely i will try to make it longer then 300 at least

Polzevatel_Google:Hello author, I have a question: how long will the novel be? (What will be the number of chapters?)
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Polzevatel_GoogleLv14

And how will you decide who the main character will stay with? Thanks for the answers

LazyDiablo:honestly i have no idea but surely i will try to make it longer then 300 at least
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LazyDiabloAuthor

depends on so many things...love is complicated but surely...it wont be easy

Polzevatel_Google:And how will you decide who the main character will stay with? Thanks for the answers
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Polzevatel_GoogleLv14

Thanks for the answer

LazyDiablo:depends on so many things...love is complicated but surely...it wont be easy
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LazyDiabloAuthor

no worries 💖

Polzevatel_Google:Thanks for the answer
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The_Ram_TSLv3

El género no es el culpable, sino la trama.

LazyDiablo:I mean well it depends... people love different kinds theres no age for genre ...its fun writing and reading this actually people really enjoyed it I don't blame some people that their taste is just different
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