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just_some_shadowsLv34mth
2024-11-02 16:39

too many clichés and the relationship with the people who hurt him is weird and stupid, like his mother loves him but ignores him, neglects him and even completely forgets about him.

I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

LazyDiablo
3.9
268 Chs

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LazyDiabloAuthor

well i have tried to give a very reasonable and detailed explanation about it u know i can say nothing was forceful about it but well thanks for reading 😂🫂

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Deceptive_OnlookerLv2

LMAO guys this is the yappee who merely reads first few chs and comes here to shit

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RustyBoiLv4

Deceptive_Onlooker:LMAO guys this is the yappee who merely reads first few chs and comes here to shit
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AculturedCitizenLv12

Well it doesn’t matter if it’s chapter 32 or 132 because the story didn’t progress at all. So even if the commenter made this review post chapter 130 , it would still be the same because the author doesn’t know how to progress the story . He’s baiting yall very good with those “I’m sad” mc trope real good

RustyBoi:
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RustyBoiLv4

Look at my review

AculturedCitizen:Well it doesn’t matter if it’s chapter 32 or 132 because the story didn’t progress at all. So even if the commenter made this review post chapter 130 , it would still be the same because the author doesn’t know how to progress the story . He’s baiting yall very good with those “I’m sad” mc trope real good
1mth
raizell24Lv4

bro tell me he isn't being a little bit** even after many chapters ( 150), cuz i am already getting tired of his mentality

AculturedCitizen:Well it doesn’t matter if it’s chapter 32 or 132 because the story didn’t progress at all. So even if the commenter made this review post chapter 130 , it would still be the same because the author doesn’t know how to progress the story . He’s baiting yall very good with those “I’m sad” mc trope real good
1mth
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AculturedCitizenLv12

As I said , the author is baiting most of his readers with the same “I’m hurt , I’m sad” trope. He most prolly ain’t have a good story in his mind and is Just milking the story so he could get the contract money or something. I dropped it around 130 because my brain was actually hurting . And guess what , none of this is me hating. It’s the truth

raizell24:bro tell me he isn't being a little bit** even after many chapters ( 150), cuz i am already getting tired of his mentality
1mth
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raizell24Lv4

i figured, i actually dropped a long a** spoiling review about the matter sadly i got an issue with the spacing between phrases and all every time a post a longue review.but i got what you mean, it was a bunch of nonsenses and totall waste of time reading about a loser who don't want to change.

AculturedCitizen:As I said , the author is baiting most of his readers with the same “I’m hurt , I’m sad” trope. He most prolly ain’t have a good story in his mind and is Just milking the story so he could get the contract money or something. I dropped it around 130 because my brain was actually hurting . And guess what , none of this is me hating. It’s the truth
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TheEnforcerLv12

bro, plz answer, as it will decide wether i will read it or not? is mc a simp? stupid? does he forgives them? or still helps them is he a pushover? i saw those tags in the charrecters

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