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Dark0mind
Dark0mindLv14mth
2024-12-01 14:49

The writer is really a fraud. I read this novel because it has a villain sign, but when I read the novel about when the hero of the novel is poor and everyone urinates on him or something like that, I think he will become evil later. All I find is an effeminate man who doesn't even have balls to defend himself, so what about him being evil?

I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

LazyDiablo
4.4
297 Chs

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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

ohh yes indeed true....if you were looking for evil and bad cold mc...its indeed not for you

4mth
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Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

well you should remove that tag author it's unnecessary anyways your novel is great and lucy isn't a villain

LazyDiablo:ohh yes indeed true....if you were looking for evil and bad cold mc...its indeed not for you
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3mth
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

... that was for Arthur and victor 😭🤣

Original_Eternal:well you should remove that tag author it's unnecessary anyways your novel is great and lucy isn't a villain
3mth
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Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

i mean in almost every novel there are villains but not all novels have villain tag

LazyDiablo:... that was for Arthur and victor 😭🤣
3mth
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

Original_Eternal:i mean in almost every novel there are villains but not all novels have villain tag
3mth
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Villain_God
Villain_GodLv13

if the mc isnt a villain i think you should really remove the villain tag author.. i was searching for villain novels and this came up

LazyDiablo:
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3mth
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

ahhh yes

Villain_God:if the mc isnt a villain i think you should really remove the villain tag author.. i was searching for villain novels and this came up
3mth
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Villain_God
Villain_GodLv13

ill read ur work no worries

LazyDiablo:ahhh yes
3mth
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

great 🫂💖💖

Villain_God:ill read ur work no worries
3mth
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raizell24
raizell24Lv4

from a pan to another...(if you were cuz your mc isn't one) the novel would've been much better if you didn't make him a wimp with all those skills and system.well, that is my honest opinion.

LazyDiablo:great 🫂💖💖
3mth
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steeve
steeveLv3

dude. are you dipressed. cuz from your book .i think you are. you really need some mental treatment. im always active. if you wanna talk. just get better. have a safe life.

LazyDiablo:ohh yes indeed true....if you were looking for evil and bad cold mc...its indeed not for you
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3mth
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

its great now bro😂✌️your handsome Author got a gf to talk now thanks tho for asking...👀you are very kind person how lovely 💖💖 i appreciate it

steeve:dude. are you dipressed. cuz from your book .i think you are. you really need some mental treatment. im always active. if you wanna talk. just get better. have a safe life.
3mth
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steeve
steeveLv3

I'm happy for you. 😊

LazyDiablo:its great now bro😂✌️your handsome Author got a gf to talk now thanks tho for asking...👀you are very kind person how lovely 💖💖 i appreciate it
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LazyDiablo
LazyDiabloAuthor

thanks 😂✌️ 🫂💖💖💖

steeve:I'm happy for you. 😊
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