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Dark0mindLv13mth
2024-12-01 06:49

The writer is really a fraud. I read this novel because it has a villain sign, but when I read the novel about when the hero of the novel is poor and everyone urinates on him or something like that, I think he will become evil later. All I find is an effeminate man who doesn't even have balls to defend himself, so what about him being evil?

I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

LazyDiablo
3.9
268 Chs

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LazyDiabloAuthor

ohh yes indeed true....if you were looking for evil and bad cold mc...its indeed not for you

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Original_EternalLv1

well you should remove that tag author it's unnecessary anyways your novel is great and lucy isn't a villain

LazyDiablo:ohh yes indeed true....if you were looking for evil and bad cold mc...its indeed not for you
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LazyDiabloAuthor

... that was for Arthur and victor 😭🤣

Original_Eternal:well you should remove that tag author it's unnecessary anyways your novel is great and lucy isn't a villain
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Original_EternalLv1

i mean in almost every novel there are villains but not all novels have villain tag

LazyDiablo:... that was for Arthur and victor 😭🤣
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LazyDiabloAuthor

Original_Eternal:i mean in almost every novel there are villains but not all novels have villain tag
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Villain_GodLv13

if the mc isnt a villain i think you should really remove the villain tag author.. i was searching for villain novels and this came up

LazyDiablo:
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LazyDiabloAuthor

ahhh yes

Villain_God:if the mc isnt a villain i think you should really remove the villain tag author.. i was searching for villain novels and this came up
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Villain_GodLv13

ill read ur work no worries

LazyDiablo:ahhh yes
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LazyDiabloAuthor

great 🫂💖💖

Villain_God:ill read ur work no worries
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raizell24Lv4

from a pan to another...(if you were cuz your mc isn't one) the novel would've been much better if you didn't make him a wimp with all those skills and system.well, that is my honest opinion.

LazyDiablo:great 🫂💖💖
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steeveLv3

dude. are you dipressed. cuz from your book .i think you are. you really need some mental treatment. im always active. if you wanna talk. just get better. have a safe life.

LazyDiablo:ohh yes indeed true....if you were looking for evil and bad cold mc...its indeed not for you
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LazyDiabloAuthor

its great now bro😂✌️your handsome Author got a gf to talk now thanks tho for asking...👀you are very kind person how lovely 💖💖 i appreciate it

steeve:dude. are you dipressed. cuz from your book .i think you are. you really need some mental treatment. im always active. if you wanna talk. just get better. have a safe life.
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steeveLv3

I'm happy for you. 😊

LazyDiablo:its great now bro😂✌️your handsome Author got a gf to talk now thanks tho for asking...👀you are very kind person how lovely 💖💖 i appreciate it
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LazyDiabloAuthor

thanks 😂✌️ 🫂💖💖💖

steeve:I'm happy for you. 😊
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