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Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]

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What is Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]

Lee la novela Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up] escrita por el autor Huntsman publicada en WebNovel. *** Formerly Fate: Dead Man's Lament ***A directionless young man tumbles to his death being an idiot, a Magus rises in another with the ambitions to conquer the world, because—"Well, why the Hell not...

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*** Formerly Fate: Dead Man's Lament *** A directionless young man tumbles to his death being an idiot, a Magus rises in another with the ambitions to conquer the world, because—"Well, why the Hell not?" https://www.patreon.com/Regularrr

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