Item: Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]
Rating: 5
Author: NO_GUD

NO_GUDLv53yr

2022-03-05 06:04

Has great potential and is progressing in a good direction currently imo, the chapters are not exactly short and updates seem to be consistent to a decent degree. MC is enjoyable to say the least, he ain't smooth but he got his quirks that probably wouldn't get on your nerves. The story starts off with the MC surviving the Fuyuki city fire by being saved by Gilgamesh when starting his second life. (Note) Gilgamesh and Shirou (Shiro) are genderbent here so far as its AU. I don't think many should have a problem with this because female Gilgamesh is supreme and Shirou is just Shirou.

Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]

Huntsman

4.4

Liked by 26 people

Replies5

Deadrule_vivekLv5

She can die when Shes killed though? 🤔

3yr

NO_GUDLv5

Indeed.

Deadrule_vivek:She can die when Shes killed though? 🤔

3yr

HuntsmanAuthor

All the chapters are 5K each, there's one that's 4.5K, so I made it up with a 6K chapter. 🤣

3yr

HuntsmanAuthor

*made up for it Sorry, typo.

Huntsman:All the chapters are 5K each, there's one that's 4.5K, so I made it up with a 6K chapter. 🤣

3yr

Chaos_Order8Lv5

😂😂😂I like how u said Shiro is Shiro

2yr

Other Reviews

FinnsRevengeLv4

MC is whiny, tells others about his system in Ep 1 for some God awful reason. Why authors insist on doing this is absolutely mind boggling and annoying. Was really looking forward to a good Magus MC in fate because I enjoy the magecraft aspect of it more than anything else but the fact he goes "I cheated cuz I'm a gamer with an rpg system so don't be sad anymore" is an absolute deal breaker.

2yr

Slushy_ApolloLv15

Overall a decent novel a little slow paced for what it is supposed to be but my biggest complaint is it legit mentions the gamer system and I read to chapter 20 and all I can say is that garbage is not the gamer system it is missing so much stuff which could be amazing considering the fate universe with dungeons and instead we get none of that

2yr

SynthesiaLv5

It's not a good story. The premise is good but the plot is not. The main character is absolutely awful. He has so many problems and so many conflicting character traits it's quite obvious the author has no idea what he wants with the MC. I made it to chapter 26. The fact he can't fathom being attacked by an organization while actively aiding their enemies is ridiculous. He then strong arms the org he was aiding into helping him get revenge, or the "Deal is off." Despite the fact that there is a Geas and he would have to suffer a severe penalty that he doesn't have the resources to give. As you can probably tell, this incident really bothered me, but its simply the final straw and a series of decisions and plot holes that make absolutely no sense.

2yr

Daemon_AnaxLv1

It was interesting until mc revealed his rpg powers. Like it's fine at one point when the story has developed for quite a while but too soon for me and just destroyed my interest . Just not my cup of tea , good luck on future chapters.

2yr

HuntsmanAuthor

Well, it's tradition, so why not? Thank you for reading my story, hopefully you guys can find some enjoyment here, though I don't doubt some might find things they either disagree with, or dislike in this story, but please bear with me, since everything will be addressed in the future.

3yr

The_reader_ofnovelLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr

schizocatLv2

Reveal spoiler

2yr

Phase_MorningStarLv3

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3yr

AnnuitiyLv4

What happened to the chapters why were they deleted

1yr

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