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Huntsman
HuntsmanAuthor3yr
2022-03-02 17:10

Well, it's tradition, so why not? Thank you for reading my story, hopefully you guys can find some enjoyment here, though I don't doubt some might find things they either disagree with, or dislike in this story, but please bear with me, since everything will be addressed in the future.

Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]

Huntsman
4.4

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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

i like your story , specially the mc ...not to mention first time reading genderbend Gil 👍

3yr
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Eli09
Eli09Lv3

is there some romance scenes?

2yr
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Huntsman
HuntsmanAuthor

I mean, there will be in the future, but not right now. They're too young.

Eli09:is there some romance scenes?
2yr
1
Frizepize
FrizepizeLv13

is there a lot of nonsensical killing? without harem to massacre a load of people humanoid or not?????

2yr
xEidolon
xEidolonLv1

Will there be yuri without MC? I'm not a fan of polyamory, so I thought I would ask before reading and giving a 1 star because it happened without a heads up.

2yr
xIRCJ
xIRCJLv2

Author didn't answer, so it's either a yes, or they didn't see this, which is hard to believe lemao #feelsbadman

xEidolon:Will there be yuri without MC? I'm not a fan of polyamory, so I thought I would ask before reading and giving a 1 star because it happened without a heads up.
2yr
Helios_Sol
Helios_SolLv5

trash this is what has become of the novel lately true trash

2yr
Other Reviews
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

MC is whiny, tells others about his system in Ep 1 for some God awful reason. Why authors insist on doing this is absolutely mind boggling and annoying. Was really looking forward to a good Magus MC in fate because I enjoy the magecraft aspect of it more than anything else but the fact he goes "I cheated cuz I'm a gamer with an rpg system so don't be sad anymore" is an absolute deal breaker.

2yr

Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv15

Overall a decent novel a little slow paced for what it is supposed to be but my biggest complaint is it legit mentions the gamer system and I read to chapter 20 and all I can say is that garbage is not the gamer system it is missing so much stuff which could be amazing considering the fate universe with dungeons and instead we get none of that

2yr
Synthesia
SynthesiaLv5

It's not a good story. The premise is good but the plot is not. The main character is absolutely awful. He has so many problems and so many conflicting character traits it's quite obvious the author has no idea what he wants with the MC. I made it to chapter 26. The fact he can't fathom being attacked by an organization while actively aiding their enemies is ridiculous. He then strong arms the org he was aiding into helping him get revenge, or the "Deal is off." Despite the fact that there is a Geas and he would have to suffer a severe penalty that he doesn't have the resources to give. As you can probably tell, this incident really bothered me, but its simply the final straw and a series of decisions and plot holes that make absolutely no sense.

2yr
NO_GUD
NO_GUDLv5

Has great potential and is progressing in a good direction currently imo, the chapters are not exactly short and updates seem to be consistent to a decent degree. MC is enjoyable to say the least, he ain't smooth but he got his quirks that probably wouldn't get on your nerves. The story starts off with the MC surviving the Fuyuki city fire by being saved by Gilgamesh when starting his second life. (Note) Gilgamesh and Shirou (Shiro) are genderbent here so far as its AU. I don't think many should have a problem with this because female Gilgamesh is supreme and Shirou is just Shirou.

3yr
Daemon_Anax
Daemon_AnaxLv1

It was interesting until mc revealed his rpg powers. Like it's fine at one point when the story has developed for quite a while but too soon for me and just destroyed my interest . Just not my cup of tea , good luck on future chapters.

2yr
The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
schizocat
schizocatLv2

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Phase_MorningStar
Phase_MorningStarLv3

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3yr
Adrian_Yanez_3288
Adrian_Yanez_3288Lv4

What happened to the chapters why were they deleted

1yr
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