FinnsRevenge

4/2/2/5/5 Story started good with the rob and MC's wishes, kinda fell when he was cosplaying joyboy and then bounced back better before it just devolved into debauchery and smut. Doesn't help author started adding yuri shenanigans. "But cyberpunk has always been gae! there's gae everywhere!" Not sure if you're aware but not every character was a aggot in cyberpunk, unlike seemingly everyone mc is adding to his pointless harem here so don't get all rainbow snappy at me. Which brings another point, MC is supposed to die and be remembered, going out in a blaze of glory! Seems rather cruel to have started all these ""romances"".

There's yuri later on bro

How is that worse? Is this 'wah wah i killed a monster to save my partner' drama forced by the ai or something?

Any gae shi like in your other hp fic?

Just shows your growth as an author and your experience with the language has improved. For the record my comment was a blanket statement regarding all uses of ai for editing and 'writing', not specifically you.

Cool, what about character morality and will there be any poison? Ntr(of any variation) , yuri, yaoi, weird fet ishes, etc etc? I'm basically poison testing so your review section doesnt get spammed with the same questions constantly and potential readers can just check your review for answers