Douluo Dalu: Era of Tang Ming.

Author here. And I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 star. Well folks the fanfic will follow canon but the MC will not be side character. It's in the AU so some slight changes will be here and there. But the main plot won't change. I hope you all like this story. And it's gonna be a long one. Will release 1 chap daily at least and almost it depends on me. So try it. Any reviews , suggestions and comments are appreciated either good or bad. Thank You- Allfather PrimorDious.

MC is so op that it became trash... especially the "fated to die skill" it made every fight trash cus he can kill anyone below his level and bellow with a thought an they have NO chance of evading it. AND WHY IS HE GETTING ALL THESE OP SKILL FROM THESE YOUNG SPIRIT BEAST. IN conclusion TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH KEEP UP THE TRASH WORK.

Your story is amazing. I love how you’ve managed to keep him overpowered but not disgustingly so. The whole can break the world at or before spirit sage type thing just gets really old. I love how detailed you get with your story because it reallly lets us have that big sense of satisfaction of getting to know the person without netting in real life. I unfortunately am also living with my parents and just driving my siblings around daily so I don’t earn money, other wise I would have given you powerstones. I will reserve the 2 I get daily for free to you though. Sorry I can’t do more. You and your story deserve it. Thank you for writing this story and I wish you my sincerest gratitude for your work and luck in everything else you do at life. Thank yo.

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La lectura es basicamente 3 persona, y mas de la mitad de la escritura se refleja en lo que hace tang san, y la incesante mencion del canon del supuesto MC en cada capitulo, cuando literalmente no cambia nada.... simplemente hubieras rencarnado como tang sang y te dabas algunas trampas, y nos ahorrabas las molestias de intentar hacer que tu MC encaje, el tipo no tiene vida.... nisiquiera tiene desarollo como personaje, lo unico que hace es hablar del canon.... apesta... Espero que tu siguiente obra sea mas creativa, author.... Bendiciones

God gives me wishes. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

the storyline is almost the same as from douluo's auxiliary upgrade system. so I just thought that this copied the story with a slight twist

why doesn't he use the knowledge of ling ming and others.......................................................................................

it seems that author thinks of tang San and master as good. Just don't understand that he possess memories and comprehension of so many amazing people but he still has to kneel and lick master just for few spirit rings. And going to Shrek SERIOUSLY Everyone knows that Shrek has nothing other than self righteous people. All the people there if had more resources could have been stronger much earlier. At this point I only feel that mc is a licking dog of tang San and master.

Fanfic is fine, but given that is released one Chapter might seem slow, against the time skip I have nothing against, on the contrary only(just do them small enough not to lose interest in fan fiction(time skip to Shrek doesn't count, and five years after the tournament, still have to come up with events to, and can easily screw it up) and divide please the third party and razgovor from the face of the gg, supposedly the third person:..... From the face gg:....

The story is great and has lot of potential. It has great continuity and the develpment is neider slow nor fast. There are some minor gramar mistakes but they have no efect upon the story and reading experience. Overall its a great story and its worth reading. This story is not for people who like to see the mc become insainly op and gets all the girls

idk what the Author thinks ... everything is a mess ... just BS in full display..... GARBAGE 🗑️🗑️🗑️

I'm not going to lie, at first I thought it was silly, there were a lot of grammatical errors, but as I've been a (male) reader for 3 years I learned to judge not by grammar but by story, so after I started reading this I realized that it was great, the story, the plot, the development among other aspects; One thing I hate is Mc's forced interaction with female characters. A word of advice: NEVER JUDGE A ROMANCE BY THE GRAMMAR, THE GRAMMAR CAN IMPROVE.

dear author I read all your fanfictions in 3 days! I really appreciate your work and as someone who has read hundreds of fantastic novels I can tell you what most of your readers don't like is the fact that the hero never has really found himself in a difficult or desperate situation. and as for me, I beg you on my knees to add RongRong to the harem. you could do some kind of scenario where she sacrifices herself to save Tang ming, then she will fall into some kind of coma .... ect ..... you can easily make a new bow to save RongRong ... and well good luck dear author.

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Thoroughly enjoyable novel with a 'Good' Mc, which is rare af on here these days as most DD novels seem to have a murderhobo mc with trust issues.

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Alr this is my serious review of this story I have read all the way up to shrek academy which is like chapter 25 so some stuff might have changed in the beginning of was really good I liked it but the mc changed over time at first he was serious and really talented more than tang San he could learn skills with just a look but as it progressed it became too comical and the mc had no challenges except the titled doulou and the gods of course other than that he can beat everyone so now it feels like a comedy release when you put a op mc in the story and just see what they do I feel like he needs to go his own separate way and do things by himself he is incredibly rich and he can really just chill in a mansion and still be stronger than tang san as long as he meditates regularly and he has really op items and abilities from other manga and idk what they do I'm just waiting for the god arc and see if it gets good then. Ps. Male another fanfic but this time with GOB as his spirit and he goes for xiao wu would be great if what anyone says.

Thanks for the Chapter, do it often, but at the expense of the second skill, how about a cover of Darkness(here is you modified), for example, to cover the spirit and all the body or darkness, which increases the attack and has corrosion(the same thing can happen with the Void)