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Lucifer_CP
Lucifer_CPLv43yr
2021-10-24 21:21

it seems that author thinks of tang San and master as good. Just don't understand that he possess memories and comprehension of so many amazing people but he still has to kneel and lick master just for few spirit rings. And going to Shrek SERIOUSLY Everyone knows that Shrek has nothing other than self righteous people. All the people there if had more resources could have been stronger much earlier. At this point I only feel that mc is a licking dog of tang San and master.

Douluo Dalu: Era of Tang Ming.

PrimorDious
4.3
133 Chs

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Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4

yh, thanks for saving my time. he should have gone to spirit hall but he becomes tang san's nanny

3yr
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AvantHeim
AvantHeimLv2

x2

3yr
_GoldenStick_
_GoldenStick_Lv3

Grandmaster is a coward, I hate him

2yr
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fiction_writer
fiction_writerLv2

Yeahh if I remember correctly he said something about not having a trash marital spirit but trash spirit master dude this dude is stuck in his cultivation level for his entire life this dude is the same trash spirit master he talks about. entire thing this dude brings to the story is his knowledge about the spirit rings what where to find them, if there was anyone else than the literal chosen of heaven that is tang San as a student to this dude would have made that person miserable

_GoldenStick_:Grandmaster is a coward, I hate him
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PrimorDious
PrimorDiousAuthor

Author here. And I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 star. Well folks the fanfic will follow canon but the MC will not be side character. It's in the AU so some slight changes will be here and there. But the main plot won't change. I hope you all like this story. And it's gonna be a long one. Will release 1 chap daily at least and almost it depends on me. So try it. Any reviews , suggestions and comments are appreciated either good or bad. Thank You- Allfather PrimorDious.

4yr

TheEndOfAllThings
TheEndOfAllThingsLv4

MC is so op that it became trash... especially the "fated to die skill" it made every fight trash cus he can kill anyone below his level and bellow with a thought an they have NO chance of evading it. AND WHY IS HE GETTING ALL THESE OP SKILL FROM THESE YOUNG SPIRIT BEAST. IN conclusion TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH KEEP UP THE TRASH WORK.

4yr
Shisui34
Shisui34Lv14

Your story is amazing. I love how you’ve managed to keep him overpowered but not disgustingly so. The whole can break the world at or before spirit sage type thing just gets really old. I love how detailed you get with your story because it reallly lets us have that big sense of satisfaction of getting to know the person without netting in real life. I unfortunately am also living with my parents and just driving my siblings around daily so I don’t earn money, other wise I would have given you powerstones. I will reserve the 2 I get daily for free to you though. Sorry I can’t do more. You and your story deserve it. Thank you for writing this story and I wish you my sincerest gratitude for your work and luck in everything else you do at life. Thank yo.

4yr
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv11

Reveal spoiler

4yr
KaiserDeSadeIII
KaiserDeSadeIIILv3

Nahh I just don't like you. Pululululukukkukukululullululululululluulullulululululululullulululluluulylululululululululuuluullulululululululu

4yr
Willian_Humildad
Willian_HumildadLv2

La lectura es basicamente 3 persona, y mas de la mitad de la escritura se refleja en lo que hace tang san, y la incesante mencion del canon del supuesto MC en cada capitulo, cuando literalmente no cambia nada.... simplemente hubieras rencarnado como tang sang y te dabas algunas trampas, y nos ahorrabas las molestias de intentar hacer que tu MC encaje, el tipo no tiene vida.... nisiquiera tiene desarollo como personaje, lo unico que hace es hablar del canon.... apesta... Espero que tu siguiente obra sea mas creativa, author.... Bendiciones

4yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

God gives me wishes. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

4yr
Discaa
DiscaaLv2

the storyline is almost the same as from douluo's auxiliary upgrade system. so I just thought that this copied the story with a slight twist

4yr
AsuraHeavenlyGod
AsuraHeavenlyGodLv1

why doesn't he use the knowledge of ling ming and others.......................................................................................

4yr
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