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Night_Builder
Night_BuilderLv43yr
2021-05-20 00:27

The story is great and has lot of potential. It has great continuity and the develpment is neider slow nor fast. There are some minor gramar mistakes but they have no efect upon the story and reading experience. Overall its a great story and its worth reading. This story is not for people who like to see the mc become insainly op and gets all the girls

Douluo Dalu: Era of Tang Ming.

PrimorDious
4.3
133 Chs

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_Wandering_Ashura_
_Wandering_Ashura_Lv4

I agree, though some do not understand.

3yr
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PrimorDious
PrimorDiousAuthor

Author here. And I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 star. Well folks the fanfic will follow canon but the MC will not be side character. It's in the AU so some slight changes will be here and there. But the main plot won't change. I hope you all like this story. And it's gonna be a long one. Will release 1 chap daily at least and almost it depends on me. So try it. Any reviews , suggestions and comments are appreciated either good or bad. Thank You- Allfather PrimorDious.

4yr

TheEndOfAllThings
TheEndOfAllThingsLv4

MC is so op that it became trash... especially the "fated to die skill" it made every fight trash cus he can kill anyone below his level and bellow with a thought an they have NO chance of evading it. AND WHY IS HE GETTING ALL THESE OP SKILL FROM THESE YOUNG SPIRIT BEAST. IN conclusion TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH KEEP UP THE TRASH WORK.

3yr
Shisui34
Shisui34Lv14

Your story is amazing. I love how you’ve managed to keep him overpowered but not disgustingly so. The whole can break the world at or before spirit sage type thing just gets really old. I love how detailed you get with your story because it reallly lets us have that big sense of satisfaction of getting to know the person without netting in real life. I unfortunately am also living with my parents and just driving my siblings around daily so I don’t earn money, other wise I would have given you powerstones. I will reserve the 2 I get daily for free to you though. Sorry I can’t do more. You and your story deserve it. Thank you for writing this story and I wish you my sincerest gratitude for your work and luck in everything else you do at life. Thank yo.

3yr
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr
KaiserDeSadeIII
KaiserDeSadeIIILv3

Nahh I just don't like you. Pululululukukkukukululullululululululluulullulululululululullulululluluulylululululululululuuluullulululululululu

3yr
Willian_Humildad
Willian_HumildadLv2

La lectura es basicamente 3 persona, y mas de la mitad de la escritura se refleja en lo que hace tang san, y la incesante mencion del canon del supuesto MC en cada capitulo, cuando literalmente no cambia nada.... simplemente hubieras rencarnado como tang sang y te dabas algunas trampas, y nos ahorrabas las molestias de intentar hacer que tu MC encaje, el tipo no tiene vida.... nisiquiera tiene desarollo como personaje, lo unico que hace es hablar del canon.... apesta... Espero que tu siguiente obra sea mas creativa, author.... Bendiciones

4yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

God gives me wishes. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Discaa
DiscaaLv2

the storyline is almost the same as from douluo's auxiliary upgrade system. so I just thought that this copied the story with a slight twist

4yr
AsuraHeavenlyGod
AsuraHeavenlyGodLv1

why doesn't he use the knowledge of ling ming and others.......................................................................................

4yr
Lucifer_CP
Lucifer_CPLv4

it seems that author thinks of tang San and master as good. Just don't understand that he possess memories and comprehension of so many amazing people but he still has to kneel and lick master just for few spirit rings. And going to Shrek SERIOUSLY Everyone knows that Shrek has nothing other than self righteous people. All the people there if had more resources could have been stronger much earlier. At this point I only feel that mc is a licking dog of tang San and master.

3yr
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