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Zeleph_Natsu

Zeleph_Natsu

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2021-04-24 Se unióGlobal
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  • Zeleph_Natsu
    Zeleph_Natsu3 years ago
    respondió a NotAGoblinSlayer

    Cette histoire me rappelle fortement Unordinary (vous êtes pas d'accord avec moi les connaisseurs ?) Surtout Vorden qui me fait penser à John. Très bonne histoire !

  • Zeleph_Natsu
    Zeleph_Natsu3 years ago
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    dear author I read all your fanfictions in 3 days! I really appreciate your work and as someone who has read hundreds of fantastic novels I can tell you what most of your readers don't like is the fact that the hero never has really found himself in a difficult or desperate situation. and as for me, I beg you on my knees to add RongRong to the harem. you could do some kind of scenario where she sacrifices herself to save Tang ming, then she will fall into some kind of coma .... ect ..... you can easily make a new bow to save RongRong ... and well good luck dear author.