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TheEndOfAllThings
TheEndOfAllThingsLv44yr
2021-04-29 06:04

MC is so op that it became trash... especially the "fated to die skill" it made every fight trash cus he can kill anyone below his level and bellow with a thought an they have NO chance of evading it. AND WHY IS HE GETTING ALL THESE OP SKILL FROM THESE YOUNG SPIRIT BEAST. IN conclusion TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH KEEP UP THE TRASH WORK.

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PrimorDious
PrimorDiousAuthor

Thanks for your review. Now please do the honour and never read this story again. Thank you and now FUÇK OFF!

Profane_Insanity
Profane_InsanityLv3

Man, im getting confuse! One of review said that he was weak, one below to Tang San, now this said he was OP! So... what's real?

VoidOriginGod
VoidOriginGodLv2

Dude your trash. I think it is a good one and also he mentioned it in the summary. Don;t read it if you don;t like it

VoidOriginGod
VoidOriginGodLv2

Dude it is a welld etialed sotry read the book and the author coments not the bad ones. it si agood book

BASTILLE
BASTILLELv13

hes op and this work is good , ignore this trash person and review

Profane_Insanity:Man, im getting confuse! One of review said that he was weak, one below to Tang San, now this said he was OP! So... what's real?
_Wandering_Ashura_
_Wandering_Ashura_Lv4

Read the D@MN£D tags, It literally STATES in ALL CAPS! OPMAINCHARACTER Is that so difficult, to take a MOMENT, to glance at the tags.

doomsdayangel
doomsdayangelLv3

Kalau Mc op seharusnya tak usah ngikutin plot

God_Of_Laziness
God_Of_LazinessLv3

English

doomsdayangel:Kalau Mc op seharusnya tak usah ngikutin plot
Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

op with good writing is one thing but a spamable instakill technique is just lazy writing so I agree with the review just not how he wrote it

_Wandering_Ashura_:Read the D@MN£D tags, It literally STATES in ALL CAPS! OPMAINCHARACTER Is that so difficult, to take a MOMENT, to glance at the tags.
Wandering_Soul_UwU
Wandering_Soul_UwULv14

I don’t know what he said but I think it goes along the lines of no lol

God_Of_Laziness:English
PrimorDious
PrimorDiousAuthor

He was already OP even without that skill. I just gave him that skill so as to mop put the trash mob characters easily. It also comes with a drawback that he can only insta kill only those that are at his or below him in spirit ranks. He can't insta kill anyone even one stage higher than him with that particular spirit ring skill. He can seriously injure or maybe make them half dead but not insta kill.

Stuffedcrow:op with good writing is one thing but a spamable instakill technique is just lazy writing so I agree with the review just not how he wrote it
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