THIS FANFIC HINTS AT MAJOR JJK SPOILERS SO READ AT YOUR OWN RISK, FOR THOSE THAT CHOOSE TO CONTINUE, AS SOMEONE WHO REALLY LIKES THIS, PLEASE GIVE YOUR DAILY POWERSTONES TO THIS FANFIC BECAUSE THE AUTHOR SAID THEY'D CONTINUE DEPENDING ON READER RESPONSE.
Writing Quality - 4*:
Author has a very charming writing style that's done in a way that's very palatable for a general audience, only complaint I have are the small typo's you'll see periodically, they won't break your immersion or anything but they still exist so I can't give it a 5* for this category.
Stability of Updates - 5*:
As of making this review all the chapters were released on the same day, and only a day ago. This is sort of only a placeholder rating as I have no data to base it off of.
Story Development - 5*:
I like where it's going right now, though I do hope the MC doesn't become genuinely untouchable otherwise the story will lose all it's tension and just become a flexing contest for every fight the MC gets in to. Gojo's charm as a character in JJK was only possible because he wasn't the be-all end-all solution to every problem, and with enough hax he is beatable. (Toji's spear that nullifies cursed techniques, the Prison Realm used to seal him, Takaba's "Comedian", and (spoilers) Mahoraga that Sukuna used to learn how to bypass Infinity)
Character Design - 5*:
The MC has a really fun personality, I wouldn't say it's exactly Gojo but he at least has Gojo's sass and doesn't come off corny either which is such a breath of fresh air (some author's don't know how to write good one-liners and taunts for their MC's, but not the author of this story.) There hasn't been much of side-characters to make an opinion of them.
World Background - 5*:
No complaints here, the author gives the readers an omniscient view of the story that the MC doesn't have (i.e following other character's POV's, getting clues through dialogue that the MC doesn't pick up on but we do) which leads to a very immersive story and a world that feels 'alive'.
