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Zoah_26
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2023-10-14 08:14

I see people complain about Gojo being Gojo. Gojo is strong absurdly at that, no in Gotham stands a chance. So he may as well learn martial arts as the reincarnator he doesn't have any fighting experience. Relying solely on his abilities is enough, but that doesn't mean he shouldn't learn how to fight. He could Blast lady shiva with his abilities and then what? Prove he is stronger than her? Prove to whom? He was there to learn how to properly fight not to show off. So yeah taking a beating once in a while is alright that's how you learn, Batman with absolutely no abilities fights opponents far stronger than him (of course it's a plot armor but) it is because he knows how to fight, he trained for it.So basically having abilities doesn't mean you don't have to learn how to fight properly. Adding a set of skills always comes in handy.Also yeah the MC is lazy but that's how Gojo is. Asking MC to use full power against someone like bat girl, lady shiva is like asking Saitama (OPM) to fight everyone with his full power.Anyways enough rant, thanks for the amazing work, Author-san. The story is progressing smoothly and I'm lovin it :))

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LostLevel
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well batman is a good example took years to be on his level, in order for mc to actually be at the he's useful for anything beyond thugs without powers he needs years of training, is borderline wasting time, I mean if you're some kind of kriptonian? good idea I mean a fight with darkside (leaving aside the eye-beams) is a glorified dogfight, as gojo? I mean gojo is not even invincible, but yeah, you kind of got scammed

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