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A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord

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Being reincarnated by a couple of God-like being, Silviana finds herself on the world of Tensura. In the forest of Jura she comes to join Rimuru and his nation. Little does she know that in a desert somewhere in the world some evil force has appeared, a force from a 'game' called Yggdrasil... Join Silviana in her new life as she tries to live a better life than she experienced in her last. Join her on her exploration and discovery of the truths of reality and the current situation of the world.

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Nightshade9000
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All the power ups, new characters and constructs are a good addition to the world of tensura but I think you have lost the sensibilities of fantasy that the canon Tensura has evoked and I fear it is getting farther away, before I elaborate on that it's necessary we discuss the crux of the story, the Lead character. (SPOILERS DOWN THERE !!!!!!!!!) For all the power that Silviana has amassed she has little mastery over it other than 'Morgan' being a mysterious benefactor and plot devices working to power her up through the initial arcs this doesn't necessarily have to be a bad or negative thing because for all I know you might be writing this in your free time. Yet the way Silviana thinks had little else to offer other than worrying about the future like a mundane being does, i.e to say not like a primordial force of time and paradox. (The elaboration*) Cultivation? Elevates perception and base human necessities Technology? It is the progeny of necessity, be it to enhance life or take it. Magic? It is the essence, the mystery that shows the potential to bend the world and also breaks the limitations of self. I do not ask for great feats of reasoning and presentation but somewhere in the story I find myself making the compromise of using discontinuous reasons and self serving emotional intelligence to settle for the Jumble of tricks that the story has become since the Falmuth war preparations. Do not misunderstand me for being anything other than dissatisfied and a bit observant of patterns in the details because if you do misunderstand, then you might not have anything to take away from 'this' which would not serve either of us. What I suggest is for a trait of consistency in behaviour and a holistic world which can serve the sensibilities of the power systems you might put in place inside of a story, anything else and I fear you might settle for less and personally I do not want to be stuck reading mighty writing put to sleep by lack of ambition or foresight. Also, Ainz was not represented well. I know that tempest had to win the battle against Orcs but with the reality bending shenanigans that I see in new chapters and other worldly fiction inspired magics, OVERLORD is no overlord at all if all the purpose he can serve is to pull the 'glorious notoriety of mass murder and evil scheming' - through mud.

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