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EvilBlueCrystal
EvilBlueCrystalLv11yr
2023-10-12 02:44

Simplistic story, + first person, + excessive describing everything, + hard to read and take seriously. Mc is ordinary student that has the body of gojo and acts very smug. He keeps thinking random stuff all the time like any of it matters, bad friendship no build up, and young masters I mean thugs show up out of nowhere to attack him so that Mc can reveal his powers. Mc says he can't and won't beat criminals cause they have plot armor, so then what is he doing? Lots of details of how his room looks and about infinity but no development, no meaning and reason why is Mc doing anything or what he's aiming for in the future.

As Satoru Gojo in the DC Universe

Ekisdaiou
4.2
29 Chs

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Ekisdaiou
EkisdaiouAuthor

Thanks I'll take this into account

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RadicalHuman02
RadicalHuman02Lv4

That criminal part sounds like it might not be worth reading.

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Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Is this Harem ?

Ekisdaiou:Thanks I'll take this into account
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SO FAR SO GOOD MY DEAR AUTHOR. DON'T YOU DARE DROP THIS FIC CAUSE EVEN THE COVER PIC IS IMMACULATE...

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