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In The Movie Worlds With My System - Fixed Grammar Version

Autor: cmluis
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A regular college student accidentally obtained a fragment of a system through traffic accident! He believed he was dead, but when he opened his eyes, he found himself in a movies with a mission to collect system fragments that exist in different worlds. first world = The Mummy second world = Resident Evil third+ world = read to find out I do not own any of the characters except for the original character (OC) in the novel. This is a grammar rewrite/translation atp, with hopefully readable grammar. lmk if you find anything wrong by commenting and I will fix it.

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cmluis
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If you like the work I do then please leave a review, it's free and gives me motivation.

Entizer
EntizerLv13Entizer

Dude I don't care about the story but thabk you man. You are a GODDD!! Thanks for fixing the bad grammer pls don't drop it

SaltedFishSku
SaltedFishSkuLv4SaltedFishSku

Please do continue this meritorious work of improving a good work. I have read the original and promptly stopped due to unreadability and having several other readable books in library. But this will earn itself a spot on my regulars since I appreciate multiverse fictions quite a lot. So thank you.

wedohi
wedohiLv1wedohi

This is the same as the other novel, just better grammar and more readable.

shaunneallux
shaunnealluxLv1shaunneallux

Добар роман Ви препорачувам да го прочитате ако сакате фантастика и филмови.

Janune_Kilua
Janune_KiluaLv4Janune_Kilua

its a good, very good fanfic all i can right now is you've done well enough.

One_Common_Reader
One_Common_ReaderLv2One_Common_Reader

Esta todo bien y eso, pero te recomendaría desarrollar de manera profunda la relación del MC con Alice para hacerlo más creíble. También creo que debería hacer qué el sistema evite problemas como la clonacion del MC, creeme, pude leer historias que se fueron al pico por ello. Fuera de ello creo que haces un trabajo increíble y solo puedo esperar por más, gracias y buenos días/tardes/noches.

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