A Song for Silver Snow

The world-building was so great that I got the chills. There is only one problem and that is the synopsis. To have such quality chaps but the synopsis that is not very hooking also plays a role. I saw that the author has a good grasp of the language as he was a native speaker. I am jealous of it as an author being meh in english. Story potential is high and I can see its success. Kudos! 😉

Writing another review as I've finished the prologue volume! I can't wait to see what happens next; this story has me hooked and I find Yin Xue's personality to be very interesting, as well as her interactions and relationship with her master. Looking forward to future chapters!

I don't remember the last time that a cultivation novel held my attention so much from the beginning. Usually they start out pretty average and improve a lot over time. Yours held me from start to finish, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters!

It's a great premise, the characters emotions could be felt, it just felt so lifelike, the plot is already been used by many novels, but I'm highly expecting the author to surprise me again. overall it's great 5/5.

amazing world building! i can imagine I'm inside the book! this story is a must read. the character are portrayed vividly. nice job author, keep up the good work

This story is certainly one of a kind, with the unique backstory and hooking start! Did not find any issues with grammar or inconsistent writing, it was more or less quite an enjoyable read! It's interesting to see how much a broken heart can affect a person, changing them from the worse to the better... or maybe the other way around. ;) This story has great potential; looking forward to more chapters!

After reading a few chapters of your story I have an idea where are from ;) what kind of books and movies you like ;) The cover page is original! The gives an idea of what to expect from the story and makes the reader interested in the plot. The most important fact is that from the very beginning of your story you are trying to describe the world you created. And you're doing that good. Well done!

This is a great beginning to what promises to be an exciting sotry. The world building is exquisit and well thought out. The author has taken a lot of time to imagine this world into being. Well done!

The introduction was slow but the rest had decent pacing. The plot was interesting but there were some punctuation issues. It did read smoothly, so I won't complain too much.

I'm in awe of the author's rich imagination😁 World-building is never easy but this author is superb in it! Everything is crafted perfectly and in detail which proved the author's efforts to penned this novel😄 Keep going!

Good job author! The story has a lot of potential, and it is beautifully written. I love the detailed descriptions and the poetic vibes on some paragraphs. I can see you put a lot of thought in the story plot, the world background and the character design. I can only say that I am truly impressed. Keep up with the amazing job! I am adding it to my library.

a very good story. i am really impressed. out of all the cultivation stories, this one answered so many of my questions that it felt good reading this tale. nice work by the author.

Silver Snow is a story with no flaws in my opinion and it's worth reading, adding to the library and looking forward to the future chapters. The author has this certain ethereal writing style that I really appreciate and the experience reading through the available chapters has been fluid and not heavy at all. The chapter length could be a bit more conventionally long, but I suppose if the author wants to go forwards with such a pace, it doesn't bother the reading much. Kudos to the author, keep up the great work[img=recommend] and have a great day!

Great job for writing! Starting a book is pretty much not good but I can say yours has potential. There were no errors in the author's writing, immersive even. Intriguing realms too, give this a read everyone!

I was confused with Bai Rong and double checked with the synopsis and I like how the story is building up for the main character. Till now everything is going great. The story is consistent but didn't entered the main plot. So waiting for more chapters!!!!!

I'm hooked reading the first chapter, it's rather well written with clear tone. Though a bit info dump here and there. There's nothing to say about the Writing style—it's top-notch in WN. The author used the 3rd person Omnicient in her writing I couldn't figure out which one is it though, it's more like the true omniscient. I recommend to pick omniscient limited with first or third person. It gave more things to work with. another thing the world building, try not to info dump them. there's many other way to do it. Overall it's looking promising. Good luck author.

Writing a new review now that I'm on chapter nine! The story is progressing beautifully and the characters being introduced are all so intriguing; it leaves me wanting to read more every time! I wish I had more stones to vote with ksjdfkshf. I can't wait to follow Yin Xue on her journey and get to know all the characters she'll no doubt meet! If your reading this before reading the story itself, READ IT! Silver Snow is very promising and I don't regret any second I spent reading it~

This story is amazing! The characters are interesting and I'm already rooting for Bai Rong even though only the prologue's been released at the moment I'm writing this. I can't wait to read what happens next; Silver Snow has a lot of potential!

This reminds me of classic writing. Mainly because it has the prologue giving exposition and your POV is a bit more omniscient than normal. Great stuff.

The story plot is great and it captures attention from the beginning. But the synopsis can be improved and it will help you capture the reader's attention. Though great work so far!