MrChinchila

Yeah, feels a bit dishonest having two of the same review.

Is this an alt account of yours? Cause you repeated the same review. I'll delete one of them either way, repeated reviews feel awkward and doesn't add much.

Yeah. I'll probably try to step up a bit in my descriptions next chapter.

Yeah. It made little sense and was a bit out of character. Oda isn't that cocky.

I think I mentioned he was a cat. like normal cat. he just act like a human. also it's a he.

Rereading it now. It sounds a bit cringe and weird. I'll rewrite into something that makes sense.

Yeah, I'll fix it. I think him knowing that he died is a bit odd as well now rereading it. thanks for pointing it out.

Also, I swear. I have nothing against parents. I have great parents. What inspired me to make parents like this, was a situation that I saw with a friend of mine. He is fine now, yet he had to move since they were too controlling.

oh? Yeah, that was my fault I need to explain it better. It's the Japanese Mythology version of an ogre.

Thanks, will revise the things you mentioned.