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MrChinchila
MrChinchilaLv13yr
2021-05-20 22:06

This reminds me of classic writing. Mainly because it has the prologue giving exposition and your POV is a bit more omniscient than normal. Great stuff.

A Song for Silver Snow

Blue_Pizza
4.8
30 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

The world-building was so great that I got the chills. There is only one problem and that is the synopsis. To have such quality chaps but the synopsis that is not very hooking also plays a role. I saw that the author has a good grasp of the language as he was a native speaker. I am jealous of it as an author being meh in english. Story potential is high and I can see its success. Kudos! 😉

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EetIshMeh
EetIshMehLv2

Writing another review as I've finished the prologue volume! I can't wait to see what happens next; this story has me hooked and I find Yin Xue's personality to be very interesting, as well as her interactions and relationship with her master. Looking forward to future chapters!

3yr
YeshuaH
YeshuaHLv3

I don't remember the last time that a cultivation novel held my attention so much from the beginning. Usually they start out pretty average and improve a lot over time. Yours held me from start to finish, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters!

3yr
BlindBandit
BlindBanditLv10

It's a great premise, the characters emotions could be felt, it just felt so lifelike, the plot is already been used by many novels, but I'm highly expecting the author to surprise me again. overall it's great 5/5.

3yr
1Little_Tree
1Little_TreeLv10

amazing world building! i can imagine I'm inside the book! this story is a must read. the character are portrayed vividly. nice job author, keep up the good work

3yr
Xuyoon
XuyoonLv1

This story is certainly one of a kind, with the unique backstory and hooking start! Did not find any issues with grammar or inconsistent writing, it was more or less quite an enjoyable read! It's interesting to see how much a broken heart can affect a person, changing them from the worse to the better... or maybe the other way around. ;) This story has great potential; looking forward to more chapters!

3yr
Jo_J
Jo_JLv13

After reading a few chapters of your story I have an idea where are from ;) what kind of books and movies you like ;) The cover page is original! The gives an idea of what to expect from the story and makes the reader interested in the plot. The most important fact is that from the very beginning of your story you are trying to describe the world you created. And you're doing that good. Well done!

3yr
David_Neilsen
David_NeilsenLv1

This is a great beginning to what promises to be an exciting sotry. The world building is exquisit and well thought out. The author has taken a lot of time to imagine this world into being. Well done!

3yr
Nr_Yet1208
Nr_Yet1208Lv12

The introduction was slow but the rest had decent pacing. The plot was interesting but there were some punctuation issues. It did read smoothly, so I won't complain too much.

3yr
Pearys
PearysLv3

I'm in awe of the author's rich imagination😁 World-building is never easy but this author is superb in it! Everything is crafted perfectly and in detail which proved the author's efforts to penned this novel😄 Keep going!

3yr
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