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Transmigrated as an NTR’ed protagonist.

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WARNING!!! The mc of this novel is weak(mentally) and thus unlikable. The story also has a tag SLOW-PACE. Which means there won't be a lot of actions going on from the get-go. Erlig, a senior in a respectable college lived his whole life without knowing such a word as trouble. Stable life with no accidents, great parents, and a good friend. Gaming was his hobby. But when he tried a new game something happened to him. He was trapped in a new world as the protagonist of this game. The worst is that he was cuckolded, humiliated, and beaten down. Not knowing how this happened he now forced to live a different life. Those things, that looked like fiction in the game turned out to be much more real. He is forced to confront the dark and grimy world that looks much harsher than what he always saw. The only things that left in his changed world, is his meager knowledge of the game and his, own, self. Given such a miraculous opportunity, he is forcibly taken out from his bubble and placed between a choice. To break and fall or to forever change his fate, his life, and everything around him. A little description to give a better understanding of what this story is about. It's my vision on a fusion of Korean fighting manhwas and Korean r-18 romance manhwas with the protagonist that is not typical to those particular works. Author's note: As this is my first novel and English is not my native language any criticism would be appreciated. Release schedule: At least one chapter every week. I also post on Scribble Hub and Royal Road.

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Chapter 1Chapter 1

AUTHOR'S NOTE: The first fifty chapters were revised, not rewritten. All the storytelling mistakes are still there. However, I fixed most grammar mistakes. As I am a single man and don't have any assistance, there will inevitably be mistakes\typos. Do point them out so I can fix them.

For all the 'new' readers, mc will stop being "weak\beta" around 55-60 chapters. Do leave your comments even on old chapters as it motivates me to write.

"Hey, Erlig, you should absolutely check this game out."

As I was gathering my studying materials, my close friend Andrew slapped me on the back. Turning around with clear annoyance in my eyes, I saw him standing there grinning from ear to ear. Patting my shoulder, he stood near my desk with his bag.

"Damn, Andrew, you should control your strength a little bit more."

I shook his hand off and rubbed my shoulder.

"It's your fault," He winked at me, "You should exercise a little bit more, look at you, so skinny."

As he talked to me, he gave way a few times to other students. To those who were leaving the auditorium after the lecture ended.

"Look who's talking," I smirked and slapped him in the stomach.

As I slapped him, his baggy hoodie couldn't hide how thin he actually was.

"Alright, alright, chill out." he guarded his stomach.

"So you finished with classes for today?"

"Nah, I still have one lecture, what about you?"

"I'm finished for today, and now I can finally relax for a few days." I stretched, feeling pure bliss.

"Nice, then we should go and grab something to eat."

After thinking for a second or two, I decided to take him on this offer.

"Lead on."

As we slowly made our way from campus to the nearest café, we made some small talk. After sitting down and ordering a light meal, Andrew started nagging me about another new game.

"I'm telling you, even a sourpuss like you will like it."

"You know, I'm more into retro gaming."

We were on our way to graduating from college, yet we didn't have many friends, not to mention girlfriends. We were childhood friends who spent most of our time together, finding joy in playing different games.

Mainly videogames. Lately, I have lost interest in games. It feels as if they went from assembly lines. Thus, I eventually grew tired of playing games. But Andrew still played lots of newly released games, nagging me to play what he liked the most.

"Look, you liked the Witches 4, didn't you?"

"Well, It's cause DvdBlueprintBlue never lets me down."

As Andrew finished his meal, he slowly sipped on his tea.

"And I'm telling you, this new studio made a bombshell. You still have your VR helmet?"

"Yeah, and what of it?" I raised my eyebrow at his question.

"What do you mean: 'What of it?'," he slapped the desk attracting a few gazes, "You freaking own the latest version, and it's presently collecting dust."

I didn't like to be stared at by people, so I tried to calm him down. "Andrew, calm down and lower your voice a bit. You are disturbing other clients."

As he looked around, he noticed the gazes and lowered his voice.

"Ahem, as I was saying, why even buy the highest specs if you don't use them to their max?" he finished his tea in one gulp, "Look, we know each other for like what? Eleven years?"

I thought for a bit and shrugged, "I guess."

"I know your eating habits, your preference in games." he lowered his voice even more and leaned forward, "And your preference in women."

He leaned back, "I know you will absolutely like this game, even though it's VR. It's a breakthrough and you get everything you like." As he finished saying this, he started looking for his phone.

Even though it sounded a bit cringey in the beginning... In the end, it was the truth. We were best friends for a long time and knew each other well.

"Oh crap, I will be late for my lecture! Anyway, you should check the game! I've already sent you the link in 'Diesel'."

As we left the café and he started running away, I realized something.

"I knew you were slacking off! You didn't take any notes again, right? Remember, I won't let you copy mine!" As I shouted this to his running back, I started walking towards home with a smile.

Knowing that I will have a few days off from the lectures and seminars, I felt that even the streets were looking better. The grass looked even greener. Birds, which usually were somewhere in the back, chirped loudly. Almost as if they celebrated the start of my little holiday. And even dusty office workers were nowhere to be seen. After half an hour of walking, I finally came back.

Taking the elevator up to the fourth floor, entering my family flat, and throwing my bag into the corner of my room.

"Finally, some freedom."

As my parents usually returned later in the evening, I decided to surf the net for the time being. Reading some web novels, surfing the video-tube, and spending my time meaningless like I usually did.

It was time for my parents to return. Heating up the food my mother cooked in the morning, I soon heard them at the doorsteps. Greeting them, we shared a small meaningless talk at the table. After finishing our dinner, we all went back to do our things.

Mother went to her study room to fill in some reports. As for my father, he was washing the dishes. As for me, I returned to my room, thinking about what I want to do in my free time.

As I was mindlessly clicking on different internet links while listening to some music, I saw a notification. It was a missed message in 'Diesel'. Checking it, it was a page with the game Andrew mentioned. While reading about this game on the store's page, my interest in it grew.

"A new classic in a genre of RPG', never before seen non-linear story, beautiful art style."

The score of the game was good, and pr managers sure knew how to sell their product. Screenshots indeed were mindblowing, but I knew that they could've easily been staged and pre-rendered.

"I guess I will give it a try, seeing how Andrew recommended it."

The price for the game was indeed higher than the usual product, but I could afford it. Gaining a stipend from college and having parents that earned well, I never felt tight on money.

After buying it, I took my VR helmet from the shelf and dusted it off. Then according to the instructions, I started downloading it directly on the helmet. As I was waiting, I started reading the game description.

"A wide variety of romanceable heroines, hm, sadly none of them suit my taste." I finished skimming through the game basics when I got a notification that the game was up.

After sitting down in a comfortable position, I adjusted the helmet and put it on. Getting through a bunch of customization and settings, I finally started the game.

The game industry always was standing on the edge of the future. So Virtual reality developed very fast. Basically, virtual reality could be used as a second reality. So the trouble of making a good VR game was making interesting gameplay while maintaining the feeling of reality.

As the game started, I felt like I just woke up. Every feeling was so real. If it was me five years ago, I would be shocked. But I already played a few VR games before, so I knew what to expect. I quickly caught the hang of it.

It was a game about martial arts that was almost the same as our worlds, like MMA or boxing, but only at the beginning, soon it would turn to be more flashy and unrealistic. Things which were mostly seen in Korean manhwas. Where people would punch someone in the air and other stuff like this.

As I spent my time in the game, I soon got the notification to end my gaming session. It was easy to lose track of time playing VR games, so I set myself a notification.

Taking the helmet off, I decided to call it a day. "I guess this game was okay." Feeling fatigued due to the days of constant studying, I fell asleep quickly.

The next morning, I woke up, washed, and ate breakfast with my parents. As they left for their jobs, I was left alone.

Starting my pc, I got a bunch of messages in 'Diesel' from Andrew.

"So, how was the game? I saw you playing it."

"You liked it, yeah? It was not so bad, c'mon say it."

"Why are you ignoring my messages, dude? Don't want to say I was right?"

"What the hell? Why are you spamming so much?" I rubbed my nose bridge and started typing.

"I guess it was okay. But why the hell should I relive my high-school years in the game? Is it interesting? Will it be as boring until the end? And why the hell you don't feel any pain?"

As I finished writing my response, I went for a glass of water, and when I returned Andrew was already writing me a reply. "Alright, let's see what you will write."

Then I got his message. "Yeah I know that you didn't like the school years but bear with it, it's just the prologue, shit will get real in a few days of playing."

I knew he would say something like this, so I typed back.

"And that's the best you came up to?"

"C'mon, Erlig, give the game a chance and stop whining. And by the way, you can feel the pain. It's just tuned down. You read the description, martial arts, and stuff like that."

"Well fuck it, I will play it for a holiday, and if it will continue to be boring, you owe me a burger."

"Okay."

"By the way, do you have any advice?"

"Eh, like what?"

"If it's an RPG, it would be handy to know what are the best stats and skills to improve."

"This game is different, so just do whatever you want. It's not essential."

"And what about bonuses while romancing a girl?"

"There's none."

I creased my eyebrows, "He's fucking trolling me."

"Andrew, for fuck sake, stop doing this, just give some advice already."

"Yeah, yeah, alright, then I will give you the only advice that matters. You can get netorared."

"But I don't even like these girls."

"Yeah, I already guessed it, but it's the only thing that actually matters. You should know that if you change your playstyle even a little bit, the game will change alongside."

"And?"

"And the only thing that will stay the same are girls, and even if you don't like them, you can at least avoid the destiny of a cuck."

"God, I hate this word. How the fuck am I going to be a cuckold if I don't have even an ounce of feelings for them?"

"Lol. Don't butthurt, chill, it's just a stupid joke. Anyways, if you don't really mind spoilers, here is the link for the guide. I should change my lecture hall. I will write to you later."

"Gl."

"TY."

I clicked the link and started reading the guide, and it was really useless. There was loads of stuff that was missing judged by the comments. Still finishing it and even reading how to raise the flags with the girls and avoid bad endings I continued playing.

Honestly, this game grew on me. I started enjoying it, playing the character that I never was or would be. As it almost felt like the real world due to the game being VR, the feeling was doubled. That was the beauty of role-playing games.

And then I didn't even notice how I played this game for a few days. Of course, I made little breaks for sleep and etc. But still, it was like I found my passion for gaming once again.

With such thoughts, I went to sleep.

"Erlig, wake up."

I heard a woman's voice through my sleep. I tried to shrug it off and continue my peaceful nap. But, apparently, the voice's owner was against it.

"You shouldn't oversleep even if it is your weekend."

"Alright, alright, I'm getting up." I sat down as I started to rub my eyes. It was something that I've done countless times, but somehow it felt different today.

I looked at my hands that were bigger than what they used to be.

"What the?" I looked around myself and saw that I wasn't in my room.

"What's happening?" This room was much smaller than mine. There was a single bed and a table with an old pc, a closet, and some dumbbells. That was basically it for the room.

I didn't know what was happening. I tried to remember what the hell happened.

"Ah, that's right. I tried to play with the save files in the game." I once again looked around. I guess that's why I woke up like it was the real world.

"Logout," I said the words I used to exit the game, but nothing happened.

"Em, I said logout," I said once more, but nothing happened.

"Exit."

"Menu."

"Settings."

I tried a bunch of things but was met with silence. No notification or menu was sliding in. Although it wasn't unusual for the games to lag, it still creeped me out.

One thing is when your pc lags, and other if something connected to your brain starts lagging. I tried to stay calm and mumble every possible option to trigger the menu, but nothing happened. And very soon, I started panicking.

"Alright, Erlig, you should get out of your bed."

A woman in her late twenties entered my room. She looked gentle with her long dark hair gathered in a low side tail. Her curves were not so prominent, but accentuated by her tight home wear, she still looked desirable.

Then this gentle-looking woman with a soft smile on her lips and large light brown eyes talked to me.

"Erlig, if you're up, why are you so quiet? You should go and eat, I made breakfast," as she ensured that I was up, she left my room, "And don't forget to clean yourself."

After she left the room, I was alone. Only my thoughts accompanied me.

"Somehow, I'm trapped in this game-world."

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Snortsneer
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SpectralApparition
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If you guys are looking for the netori, harem and r18 stuff might have to wait till this reach 100 chaps. mc character growth is just too strange for someone that was essentially an otaku. Too much self identity crisis and mc is still stuck in thinking in the norm when he is pretty much in a ntr game. The moral thing is just getting annoying at this point, contradicting thoughts that just annoys me or most readers. This is slow paced but don't central this around just the mc since it got boring reading it. Like adding about world building and how that world works from his research in his PC would probably help the mc make solid decisions. Cause from all the chapters so far, he gets pissed most of the time like as if a stick got stuck in his ass when given some info from his "friends". The big events so far that should have boost his character growth a lot, always have a reason to revert him back to normalcy thinking. It was already annoying at the beginning but now it's 45 chapters and little changed other than his physical attributes. Especially the revenge part where he thought this plan and how he was really gonna ruin this girl and even brags about how he will do it right from those shitty "revenge" stories he read in his previous world. Instead we get something that missed that claim..... it would be better if the author never added those sentences/reference cause it just made the mc even more unbearable. it may make sense realistic wise but God dam is it an annoying/bad story telling. Nothing is really note worthy that would hook the reader because of the "slow pace" and the 2 chapters or so of r18 text are probably what 90% of the reader cared about. The slow pace is just hard to pull off and may need to really amp his character. Cause at this point, you can just skip/skim chapters and probably won't miss anything important.

AmIEvil
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Writing quality 4 Story development 3 Character design 2 Updating stability- I guess it depends but I give a 3 stars. World backround 4. I'm not really an expert in terms of reviewing works but I'm still going to give my opinion?I guess. Writing Quality is decent and readable, although there's some grammatical errors It was still fine. I like the writing style based 1st person perspective so I give 4 stars. The story development for me is pretty off that's why I just gave 3 stars in this aspect. The story is very slow paced and It makes the reader feel bored. Me personally like slow pace to catch up the details and some stuffs. But slowing the progress too match will leave the bad taste to those people reading it. I highly suggest to learn how to control the pacing, Fast , Slow and etc to assure the reader is still in the story. Character development is really not good for my opinion. At first I thought he was just a chill guy wanting peace and sort of playing video games with his friend. But after some events it was highly showed the he is the most loser , beta mc that I've ever read in my whole life. His personality is really sucks like in a bad way that it affects the readers mind. His decision is hilarious to the point I want to beat him up. I think It's okay to make him like a average person....but too much and making him like a sore loser just holding the potential of the story. At first he was bullied so he will decide to change into a new different person but still after all the things happened he just become more and more trash. He was aware the fact his friend is having *** behind his back making fool of him. I like the idea that the mc didn't care but what did he do?He played with them like a fool and it really look like stupid in my opinion. I don't want to offend the author of this story but It's been a while since I became frustated at the stupidity of a person.He can just avoid talking with that so called friends of him especially Jet, this kid is not a friend at all. He was just acting and making fun of the mc behind the back and thinking how superior he is by doing malicious things with the girls that close to him. Ps: I'm not starting argument I'm just stating what I feel about the story so far so please go easy on me and don't take it as an personal insult. Everyone has the right to do what they want to do , right what they want and I really respect the efforts of the authors sharing their thoughts and imagination

doggy_style69
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jes1e1
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note- I am a big amateur when it comes to writing reviews. but I will still give it a try. 1. My Favorite part of this novel was the writing quality. I think that the author put a fair amount of work pleasing the readers with his writing capabilities which he absolutely did. 2. As you all may know, the story revolves around a protagonist who got transmigrated into a game that he used to play. and the bad news is that he got put into the body of a person who got NTRed which explains the title. The story revolves a lot about fighting and a lot of cuckolding (not the mc whos doing the cuckolding because he is actually the one getting cucked but ofc its part of the development of the story). one of the key factors on why the novel got such a bad rating is because of how inconsistent the updates and development were. I can clearly understand that some people are just getting mad because of how slow the story is, and that is where the inconsistency comes into role. imo, if you are going to try writing a slow-paced story, I would recommend uploading more chapters per week. 1 chapter per week is not really ideal if you want your story to be highly rated and so on. It may be because the author has some work to do irl and because it is only a hobby but it may have been a bit better to upload a bit more than once per week. (for example villain cultivator, endless path infinite cosmos etc) I actually got a bit confused about the choices of the protagonist considering that he has played the game before and why he did not make use of his knowledge. I mean, if he did not even have knowledge about the game why would we readers even need the 'useless' information? I mean should he not have a bit of an advantage so that he does not start from "scratch"? I wont really pick on the protagonists development because I actually considered the amount of chapters it has unlike those people complaining about why the protagonist is such a wuss and so on. overall it is decent and it couldve had a better, overall "look" to it if it was less slow paced but thumbsup for the author.

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