Lizabelle88
Woah..I really thought it was something to do with mystery romance but it had supernatural plot in it. Every chapter gives you the feels-excitement,thrill,fear,happiness,sadness,regret,hope and love. It's all there. The words are beautiful yet carefully chosen. The flow of the story is flawless. Very well described. Good work dear author. This is an excellent novel that you must read!
A fantastic read, The plot and story are amazing. It is well written and full of suspense. The three sisters characters are developed excellently and are weaved into the plot smoothly. This writing is of high quality and the story will keep you engaged in each chapter. I kept on reading more and more. Well done, this is an incredible adventure and time flew quickly as I was immersed in a beautiful experience. Added to library! Well done!
First of all, I give full credit to how difficult creation can be and the efforts made putting pen to paper. Second, this book was part of a promotional offer where you spend 50 coins and get full access to the book for 7 days. (Although, totally my fault in misreading the bit about access for a limited time before reverting back to normal costs - otherwise I would have read the free chapters before spending my coin). That being said, I only made it to about Chapter 28. The premise for the book is very intriguing - three beautiful sisters, each mysteriously disappearing after a visit to a forbidding castle, encountering mythical creatures along the way. Unfortunately, I personally couldn't get past the writing. The verb tenses are all kinds of mixed up, throughout the text. And the dialogue is pretty juvenile. You have powerful, mythical creatures in a medieval world saying, "Bro", "Buddy", "coz", and more. Explanations for background and character choices seem awkwardly placed, as if made up on the spot. And terminology is often mixed up, like using "nosey body" instead of the actual term "busybody". A lot of my issues are personal preferences and you can see from other reviews that people can look past the writing issues and enjoy the story. Unfortunately, I just couldn't. And I regret spending coin on it. Although, this could make for a very cool TV show. Like I said, cool story, poorly executed. But I really do admire the author for trying. I would just recommend a good proofreader/editor to help get those great ideas down.
This book is worth giving a shot. I have been looking for a lot of good books that i will be indulged in finishing it but there are very few to match the top. Yours is one among them, Author. Thanks for writing it. I am still in process to complete your book, after which i hope to read more of yours.😁🤗☺️
I have nothing, but good things to say about this story, it's so suspenseful and just keeps you wanting to read like yeesh! Love it think you're doing great work so far keep it up. Also the way you described the village they lived in at the beginning was gorgeous, god-tier. I love, love, love! Descriptiveness and you've got it!