Thank you so much! I didn’t want the MC to be 2-dimensional. I wanted him to have real emotional struggles.

It’s kind of a mix of both, there’s a king, but there’s also Limos, businesses and mansions, and certain resposibilities are given to certain parts of the Royal Bureau. But thank you so much, and I’ll work on getting longer chapters!

Thank you so much the world is still in a sort of development, but the further you read and the more you learn about its lore I'm sure you won't be disappointed!

This story was very intriguing, was a definite page-turner. I felt like I was hit with more surprises in each chapter I read. The author did an amazing job of making a Mc that was out of the box for a female Mc and that along with the other characters and the progressing plot made the story that much more enjoyable. This is a hell of a good read!

Thank you so much I'm gonna keep on trucking!

I’m 5’4 cause my mom thought it would be real cute to give me all of her genes. Gotta love the short parents.

Ofc ofc! I’d be happy to make that adjustment!

This whole chapter had me cackling. Well done.

This is a great start so far! Kept Me reading abd wanting to see more!

First thing I want to say is I really like this story so far. Personally I’ve got no problems with it. I think my favorite thing about it is the desriptiveness of the world and its lore. That’s where it really shines to me. I can tell that this was really well thought out, and I enjoyed every second of it! I can’t wait to see what the author does with this story in the future!

I like the world you’ve built so far. Being a world building and power-system junkie I love me a good world. But one thing I would’ve reccomended was spoon feeding us parts of the world and introducing important figures like Kings. Gradually through the main characters eyes and interactions.

TWo chapters so far, and so far I’ve gathered that Kite could probably whoop me in Chess.

Wow I’m already hooked, You may have read this like 5k times, but this is an amazing start.

I think this story is very compelling so far, I like the three characters I’ve been introduced to so far, and the concept and I think this story has much potential. I hope that the author takes the criticism thats been given to them and uses it to evolve this book into an absolute gem! :)

Some small grammatical issues like the use of “u” Instead of spelling it “You” And a miX of past and present tense, but your stories really interesting so far!!!

I think this is is really interesting!!!