Review Detail of Meemx4 in The Tale of Three Sisters

First of all, I give full credit to how difficult creation can be and the efforts made putting pen to paper. Second, this book was part of a promotional offer where you spend 50 coins and get full access to the book for 7 days. (Although, totally my fault in misreading the bit about access for a limited time before reverting back to normal costs - otherwise I would have read the free chapters before spending my coin). That being said, I only made it to about Chapter 28. The premise for the book is very intriguing - three beautiful sisters, each mysteriously disappearing after a visit to a forbidding castle, encountering mythical creatures along the way. Unfortunately, I personally couldn't get past the writing. The verb tenses are all kinds of mixed up, throughout the text. And the dialogue is pretty juvenile. You have powerful, mythical creatures in a medieval world saying, "Bro", "Buddy", "coz", and more. Explanations for background and character choices seem awkwardly placed, as if made up on the spot. And terminology is often mixed up, like using "nosey body" instead of the actual term "busybody". A lot of my issues are personal preferences and you can see from other reviews that people can look past the writing issues and enjoy the story. Unfortunately, I just couldn't. And I regret spending coin on it. Although, this could make for a very cool TV show. Like I said, cool story, poorly executed. But I really do admire the author for trying. I would just recommend a good proofreader/editor to help get those great ideas down.