Reviews of The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!
The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!
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So far.. I'm loving this book. One of the most appealing thing about this book is that the author has used a number of kaomojis and that makes it fun to read ! I as a **** reader find it really interesting and creative cuz it's something new for me..😅😆 Also the plot is gettingkinda interesting and much more mysterious as the story goes on.. The FL and the ML seem like a cute pair too huhu🙆️💖 Waiting for their interactions more often~ 🙆 Keep up the great work authornim ~~ FIGHTING !!! ᕙ(͡°‿ ͡°)ᕗ
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Ah Author here! Firstly, I thank all my readers for their honest feedbacks. Your suggestions and advises has helped me in keeping my shortcomings in check. Secondly, I wish my readers a hearty welcome to my book. Read and enjoy it, do drop by your suggestions and keep me motivated. Thank you! ❤ And thirdly, since I'm here might as well top up my ratings with 5 stars hehe.
Author here, there isn't much to speak about my work. I'll leave that upon you my lovely readers. Umm...just going to drop by some of my thoughts here~ As you see I'm rookie here. So bear with me and I would appreciate encouragement 😇 My book is basically a fantasy romance unlike many other novels you'll come across. I'll be sure to make it both thrilling and fluffy, funny yet wee bit teary, my characters would develop at it's own pace, not to fast or slow. I'll just leave their development to themselves and will be following their wish and make it known to you all😜😆 So give it a try and make my novel feel the love. Thank you 😇 ❤❤❤
Since the story just begun, there isn't much too review on. I'm waiting for more chapters to get a glimpse of the romance and character development. The fl seems interesting and I can jolly well say that she would b one hell of sassy woman! This story a little different might have different plot I'm more used to. I'm waiting for the ml, I can assume he might b carrying a big jar of vinegar along with him haha! Looking forward for more! 😊❤
Superb work author 🥳🥳 The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . I wish you do wonders in the upcoming times. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins]
Amazing! I love the author's writing style. Those emoticons made from special characters are really cute and refreshing though I would kinda suggest to reduce them by a little bit. Too much of a good thing will reduce it's value. Unlike the name suggests the story actually starts in the modern age. It seems to be a fantasy romance with supernatural elements. The protagonist seems really cool and likable. Do check out this hidden gem, it has a lot of potential.
Hi, here is my swap review. Before I begin, I just want to say that this is just my opinion and I'm not trying to be mean or offensive. First of all, the title is really eye catching so congrats on that. The blurb is also interesting. Writing quality It's pretty good, no major grammatic errors or anything like that. I do suggest maybe experimenting with sentence length. However, it felt really dry because most of the time I was stuck in the mc's head. Please consider show not tell; a lot of writers find it hard balancing the two, myself too. But it is paramount that you get the right balance. I suggest writer Jenna Moreci's youtube channel. Show me the character argue with her father, show me the character's mom leaving. Don't tell me because it takes away from the story and as a reader I don't feel sympathy to her. I won't be able to feel that connection that makes me root for her and want to read just one more page to see what she does next. Story development It's the first time I have ever given someone a one star for this, and it may seem like I'm being mean or too critical, BUT, love, I was stuck with the Mc for 5 chapters and the inciting incident did not happen. You are just showing me this girl going to school, coming home, going to school. And that's 5 chapters of nothing happening. I know, but stuff is happening! Technically no, your character is not being proactive. The plot is not developing. I'm five chapters in and all I know is a teenage girl who has daddy issues dreams of this guy, who seems to be from another world? The dialogue also isn't being used efficiently. The voices of the characters should be distinctive. Character Design I really don't mean to be offensive, but I literally feel no sympathy for the mc. She's not being proactive, literally just complaining about how awful her life is and being a whiny brat. From the title and the blurb I got the impression that the main character will be a nice mature lady, or at least someone like you said, daring and mischievous and fun. Instead, it was a teenage girl being emo and overdramatic about her life. Instead of liking her and rooting for her, I just thought she was annoying. I know that sounds super daunting, but there's a simple fix to that. When you introduce your character, even if she's not proactive (doing something to move the plot along or get what she wants) you should pick her good qualities and highlight them by showing it. For example, is the main character kind and helpful? - Show her help a lost kid. Is the character a brat with a good heart? - Show her being mean to a shop clerk, then go and show a girl thanking her for helping her out with the clerk. The first chapter, you should cash in to the good/heroic qualities of the mc and build sympathy. As for world back ground, are we in modern society? What about this world the male lead I'm assuming is from? Why are you telling me the mc's family history in the beginning? to make her seem pitiful? but that works against you, you should show it instead (e.g. have an awkward family dinner). Think about ways to pepper the world background/history throughout your work and not all at the beginning. Dialogue is a really good way to show the world background. The emoji's are really cute, but don't rely on them to show how your mc is feeling. I will be really honest, please don't hate me, but I read a lot of novels and I've seen this sort of idea of a strong female lead and male lead that acts as a damsel in distress a lot. Maybe think of a little twist to make it more fun, your own little thing. Maybe make the male lead partially blind during the full moon and he gets in trouble because he forgets and that's how the female lead comes to his rescue and he takes a liking to her? I suggest that maybe dropping hints of their fated connection and use it as a reveal or a midpoint twist later on. Just a suggestion you don't have to do any of this. I recommend Jerry Jenkins. He has a free blog with so many free resources on everything, and a youtube channel. Anyway, I hope I did not crush you too badly. Wish you luck!
The story has great potential. The concept/premise is already there. It just needs a bit of fleshing out. The writing style is quite interesting. I've seen some traditional books with that kind of style before but not with emojis/drawings. It's creative. Seems that the target audience is of age bracket younger than me so in that aspect it isn't quite a match for me. Nevertheless, I still find it interesting. I think the author did a great job in capturing the vibe and the tone of the story. It's already evident in the first few chapters. She nailed it. Some other observations, I found some disconnect between the few chapters with the synopsis. Even the FL's name seems different. I wonder if there's reason behind it? I also noticed a change in POV from 1st person to 3rd person by Chapter6. I suggest to stick to only one all through out. :) All in all, I recommend it. It looks fun and engaging. Kudos to author. Keep writing. 👍
First off, love the fact you used a quote at the beginning. Those are definitely my favorite things an author could do!!! Second, I love the reality of this book. This author portrays that in the very beginning, and I very much admire and adore that. I thought reading the introduction, it was a magificant beginning. Definitely in my library for sure!!! Can't wait for more updates!! I would like to add I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum.
Honestly, I was a bit skeptical about this novel but I couldn't stop my curiosity to know why the queen emperor's wife is daring. Being suspense got my urge up so I decided to read chapter 1 and I'm loving it so far and could only wished there's more chapter as I don't want to binge read and then wait.
