The story has great potential. The concept/premise is already there. It just needs a bit of fleshing out. The writing style is quite interesting. I've seen some traditional books with that kind of style before but not with emojis/drawings. It's creative. Seems that the target audience is of age bracket younger than me so in that aspect it isn't quite a match for me. Nevertheless, I still find it interesting. I think the author did a great job in capturing the vibe and the tone of the story. It's already evident in the first few chapters. She nailed it. Some other observations, I found some disconnect between the few chapters with the synopsis. Even the FL's name seems different. I wonder if there's reason behind it? I also noticed a change in POV from 1st person to 3rd person by Chapter6. I suggest to stick to only one all through out. :) All in all, I recommend it. It looks fun and engaging. Kudos to author. Keep writing. đ
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