Reviews of The hero of the 8 sacred swords

Overall, a good novel, but the author needs to correct the grammatical and typos error. And to use the past and present tense correctly. If the author can do this, it will be a great read without confusing readers. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This is story very nice and great. i like that so keep it up, i will be waiting for next chapter. so good luck, author! your book full journey ... i like that.

it's really nice and interesting wanna keep reading it. its indeed a nice book. hope to see more from the author good luck. hope you will develop more.

Likeable MC and good dialogue when compared to most novels on the site. Author needs work sowing not telling but the story ins enjoyable eough that It should be at least checked out by anyone who comes across it. Do yourself a favor and give the first chapter a read <3

Nice novel !! but I hope the author can make the descriptions more vivid for the readers to imagine what he's trying to convey... and the dialogues can use some refining... Cheers to good work!!

If you're into GIGACHAD MCs then read this story. Has it's own dose of ecchi and humour in it balanced very well 👀👀 The writing need a bit of improvement

The story got me really hooked, its really funny and interesting. MC as well as the other characters are really likable. Negatives- Grammar, and the description gets short. -------------------------------- I really feel your story has a great potential, grammar and good descriptions are something that could get better with practice. I am really looking forward for your future work. -----KEEP WRITING----

Writing Quality: It's pretty good your just rarely missing some words that didn't make sense with the sentences. Also, you should sometimes describe what they're doing for example, when one of the student walks into the class (Some readers can tell that the person is coming into the classroom but many can't) Stability of Updates: Excellent! Story Development: Just tiny bit bland sometimes Character Design: Nice! It does give off the vibes that all the character s are supposed ot hold a long with there personality. Just work a little bit more on showing it (Just a tiny bit more) World Background: Where? I mean I do know where they are everytime. but what does the area look like? ( A little bit discription of the surounding would be nice.) (Hope you review mine honestly when you come back after your travel!!)

Don’t get me wrong; this isn’t a bad story by any means, but the story is clouded by grammar and punctuation errors that divert from the true story. The story itself is interesting and funny, making for a good enough read, but I can’t get behind the punctuation and grammar errors. Of course, this is not the end of the world; it could be fixed with some editing, but that’s my take. I’ll stick around to see if these problems get fixed later on because the story itself has potential.

I enjoyed the journey portrayed in this novel at first... with our protagonist's tardiness to the entrance ceremony and the overall classroom vibe with the introductions and stuff... frankly when I started reading it, I thought it was written in script form...what with the lightning strikes and stuff... the writing quality is good.. character design a little lacking but it is there.. Great piece so far author

I like the story, it's just like the way of writing is not really suit me. I don't mean that's bad, its jsut, not suit my taste really well. Keep on writing it will be a good story

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

The lines or dialogues are well written and smooth to read. Though there are some raspy parts I can tell you have it a little heavy on describing some portions clearly. But I like how you maintained the flow of the story and its development stable. Keep up the great work, Author! <3<3<3

Hello, I am the author, if you like this novel give your review, and your views motivate me to continue writing, when I finish I will bring you another project