Review Detail of goodeygoody in The hero of the 8 sacred swords

Don’t get me wrong; this isn’t a bad story by any means, but the story is clouded by grammar and punctuation errors that divert from the true story. The story itself is interesting and funny, making for a good enough read, but I can’t get behind the punctuation and grammar errors. Of course, this is not the end of the world; it could be fixed with some editing, but that’s my take. I’ll stick around to see if these problems get fixed later on because the story itself has potential.