Swords_Sensei
I seek to get closer to my dream of creating novels that everyone likes, so I hope you like my writings.
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Just great. I loved it, I was hooked from the first chapter. I'm not a big fan of kinky stuff, but what I read really made me laugh and made me enjoy reading. I am someone quite serious with my reviews and I have to point out that I would have liked to see the main character (not being a baby) in the other world (something 14 or 13 years old according to the logic of that world) and more about magic, But I loved it. 5 stars.
With this work I have mixed feelings, on the one hand the concept seems great to me, something little used in works that I have seen before; but, I get lost in some parts (in a bad way). It was hard for me to follow the rhythm of the work during the first chapters, then I got used to it and I liked it, but there were times when I got bored. But in short, I liked it, it was good.
Interesting, that is the word with which I am going to define the work, from the first moment I suspected that there would be more to see and I confirmed it in chapter 3, the inclusion of skills will be something interesting and seeing how they manage to endure. one on top of the other. Since the work has few chapters I cannot say more but I will wait to see more of what this work has to offer.
Good story, honestly I would have liked to see some more comedy moments, but that does not mean that the narration is good and that the development of the characters too, having only 5 episodes the review that I can give is short. When it has a greater number of chapters, I will give another review.
girls always go to the bathroom together, this man has culture :v