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goodeygoody9mthReplied to Charlie_Hunter_2679Ch 5 Amson, 17, "Wayward Cog"- goodeygoody9mthReplied to DaoistLZZAn4Ch 4 Amson, 17, "Primed"
- goodeygoody1yrCommentedCh 1 The Announcement
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The way the author conducts this story is masterful, and it deserves recognition based on this fact. Although there are some instances where the grammar and punctuation are a bit iffy, the product is definitely better than most on this platform. From their use of quotes to further mystique to their building of the story’s background and characters, this author displays their writing experience through carefully placed and crafted events that make for a story that I see gaining a huge following in the future. As the novel is still in its early stages, one can follow the journey alongside the author and are sure to be in for a ride.
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Nesquik🤨
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Smooth criminal
Saxon's face lit up, "I missed you too hu- hey what are you-" while he was distracted Xara had already snatched the document from his hand and was inspecting it after locking the panicking Saxon in a box made of compressed mana. - goodeygoody2yrCommented
🤭
"Because I missed my fool of a husband," Xara stated as she made her way over to her husband and wrapped her hands and around his waist. Pulling him close like a man would a woman, then placed a kiss on his lips with a calm smile. - goodeygoody2yrPosted
Honestly, I haven’t been this hooked on a first chapter before. I’ve seen others come close, but none compared to how immersed into the story I became just from the first chapter. Throughout my reading, I was kept entertained, complementing the quality of the first chapter, and although I don’t typically read harem or romance novels, I came to appreciate the worldbuilding and story of this one. Keep up the good work.
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This was an awesome start
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Lili’s a funny character. I like how she’s very unique compared to Xeik and Blossom.
But how could it end like this? Everyone was even more confused than before. "What is the meaning of this? If all it took to pass was lasting a day, why were we in there for an entire month?" It was Lili who blurted out her questions in a fit of rage. - goodeygoody2yrCommented
Dang. This is going quickly.
Some gave up right away, knowing they had absolutely no chance of passing. Other's grit their teeth and pushed on. No matter what, they refused to give up. Like that, a month passed in the flaming world. As time passed, the pressure kept piling up and the number of candidates dwindled from well over three thousand to a little over 100. - goodeygoody2yrCommented
Practicing while on fire?!
By the third day, only a handful of people were left inside the lake. Others couldn't hold on despite trying their best. Xeik glanced over at Blossom, who seemed to be engulfed in flames, but he understood she was just practicing her breathing technique. She kept going even after the assessment ended. - goodeygoody2yrCommented
Truth
Almost every hand went up simultaneously, seemed a lot of questions were left unanswered in that vague explanation. - goodeygoody2yrCommented
These two have a heart-warming relationship.
He released Blossom, and they rushed to form up as they looked toward the mage, who showed up. He had his hair cut low and a pair of glasses hanging on the bridge of his nose, with no straps. - goodeygoody2yrCommented
I’m curious as to the world they live in
Blossom chuckled lightly upon hearing those words, "I can't wait. I will bring about a new era and take humankind to new heights. I'm sure my father watching from the other side will be proud."