Review Detail of Bit_Lucky in The hero of the 8 sacred swords

Writing Quality: It's pretty good your just rarely missing some words that didn't make sense with the sentences. Also, you should sometimes describe what they're doing for example, when one of the student walks into the class (Some readers can tell that the person is coming into the classroom but many can't) Stability of Updates: Excellent! Story Development: Just tiny bit bland sometimes Character Design: Nice! It does give off the vibes that all the character s are supposed ot hold a long with there personality. Just work a little bit more on showing it (Just a tiny bit more) World Background: Where? I mean I do know where they are everytime. but what does the area look like? ( A little bit discription of the surounding would be nice.) (Hope you review mine honestly when you come back after your travel!!)