Reviews of The Dream Shifter

Very unique story, your wordings and how you write is precisely smooth, it is readable and I enjoyed reading the first chapter so as knowing the characters especially Yuki, I like the plot terms you made and your creativity they have potential. Me... is also a an Author who's hardworking to enhance my writing skills so being said that you write so well is something to be proud of. Good Luck Author! keep up the good work.

Hello! As thanks for the review swap, here I am! Please don't expect some kind of expertness from me for I am not a professional editor. Okay, let's start! Your story doesn't have any wrong grammars and typo, and It's actually a good thing(unlike me). The main character can be realistic, he has flaws, strength. Well, keep writing more because I'm going to bid this story good luck.

Good writing. The story so far looks promising and good to follow. The style is similar to Japanese LN except the paragraphs are quite long. The characters have potential, I look forward to what the author will do.

I like your writing style; it's excellent! Grammar and punctuation are all fine. You got a really nice vocabulary there, I can say. However, I think you can extend it much further, but considering you're writing too many chapters per day with a large length, I can say it's worthy of praise and it's really admirable. Updates are ideal! However, I've got a piece of advice here for you: Why not make the chapters shorter? It gets a little bit tedious to read a chapter with a long length. My suggestion is to make the chapters' length near 1.2k words. This way, you can release more chapters and be in the update list for more time and also exceed your views. Your readers won't get bored and will read the other parts when they can. Doesn't it sound better? Also, the paragraphs are a bit too long. There is much distinct information in each paragraph I noticed, so why not split them into more paragraphs centered on that different information you want to give your readers? I've enjoyed the story until volume 1. I will give a better review when things go further. And let's be honest, the real challenge starts in the middle of the way. So don't lose your motivation and don't drop this novel because you can get a good place at TOP with this update stability and writing quality. But anyway, it's just me advising and it's your choice. Have a fun time writing!

The novel began to read chapter 1, quietly grew into 10! Easy to read, romance, school, supernatural! I liked the construction of dialogues, they are live, as if watching an anime, and with high quality! The novel breathes, the characters are active, the novel itself is fascinating! What I especially liked was the dialogue! Thanks to the author for such an interesting novel! Yours faithfully

It is a good novel. Keep it up author san. The update was stable. But as I advised in one of your chapters, don't force yourself writing. Just write happily so that you can be in your best position to write. The writing quality is good, there were some mistakes and missing comas but was pretty readable. Good job!

The story is interesting but its slow pace which im not use to but over all its a great story would recommend it. The characters are developed and there not much i can say since ive only read the first few chapters

I like your writing . No mistakes and nice details allowing one to envision it. And I gave an extra for your thick face. Even at my best, I can only do this swap review. Keep up the good work

I really like how the story is highly influenced by japanese light novels as I am an avid fan myself. The concept behind the story is fairly untouched and bizzare enough that makes you want to read more. There is little to speak of in terms of errors but I think you should utilize commas more in the narrations, that's all. Amazing story! Keep up the good work author!!! ʕ•ﻌ•ʔ

You have really nice writing that flows and you break up the paragraphs smoothly and its easy on the eyes. I loved how you started the story and gave us a glimpse into this mysterious world. Your also really good at setting tone and mood through the way you describe. Your character is solid and I like the premise of your story. Keep up the good work!

Great writing quality. Nice storyline. Good world background and character development. No grammatical error prob but little typos that can go barely unnoticed. D problem I have is that, the paragraph's are long, perhaps it changed it future chapters, but I haven't read that much. And ur chapter damn is long. U can get 2 to 3 chapters from that. Because for someone like me, it made it hard to follow... I had to strain my eyes till the 25 pages ended. It was harder bcos the paragraphs were long. So I read a long paragraph continuously for many pages. I had to overly calm my mind and read some paragraphs again to grasp what was happening, esp during Yuki's walk after he left home for school. No your details are on point. Everything good. Its just that little prob I have. There might be others like me. I'm sorry, longest review I have given. Perhaps add me up on discord if you are there. @BaeVida#7167

Impressed by the writing style... it's just beautiful. I am liking the story and the thoughts of the mc. It's getting intriguing as I read more.

I love the story, this story clearly show us that no one was born strong, it is a known fact that we are who we are because we developed ourselves, skills and talents and that is the same thing Yuki (MC) underwent in this story. He was a weak boy who dreamt of doing the impossible and he never gave up on his dreams. The charact design is good and so is the story development. I really enjoyed reading this novel and hope that others will join me. So everyone let's continue reading. Thanks author for this wonderful story.

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Coming from webtoons and manga, I appreciate this work a lot. The visual language makes it easy to envision the world with little effort. The pacing is slightly slow at the beginning, but necessary. I feel like this helps with the world building elements. I look forward to following this story further, has a lot of potential!

The starting was nice. The concept looked promising but it's still hard to tell about the story development. But the grammar is great and I can tell the author is very good with words. Do update more 😊

Great job author. As we read the chapters , it's really like watching Yuke changes and how he struggles to get to his goal. The characters's description is so good. Wish you the best.

Updating my review as my first review was written when there were only a few chapters. I was proven right that this was going to be a good novel. This turned out to be a good read. The story starts of somewhat slow but it holds very impressive character development that is important to flesh out characters. The words used to describe situations And everything are very well chosen and there are alot of words that are advanced and used well. This brings about a detailed imaged of what is occurring and paints a picture beautifully

The writing quality is good, I didn't find any typos or grammar errors. The stability of updates can be elevated more. But it is up to the author. Story development and world background are also great in my opinion. Lastly, the character design is realistic enough. Added to my library