Review Detail of BaeVida in The Dream Shifter

Great writing quality. Nice storyline. Good world background and character development. No grammatical error prob but little typos that can go barely unnoticed. D problem I have is that, the paragraph's are long, perhaps it changed it future chapters, but I haven't read that much. And ur chapter damn is long. U can get 2 to 3 chapters from that. Because for someone like me, it made it hard to follow... I had to strain my eyes till the 25 pages ended. It was harder bcos the paragraphs were long. So I read a long paragraph continuously for many pages. I had to overly calm my mind and read some paragraphs again to grasp what was happening, esp during Yuki's walk after he left home for school. No your details are on point. Everything good. Its just that little prob I have. There might be others like me. I'm sorry, longest review I have given. Perhaps add me up on discord if you are there. @BaeVida#7167