Hello! As thanks for the review swap, here I am! Please don't expect some kind of expertness from me for I am not a professional editor. Okay, let's start! Your story doesn't have any wrong grammars and typo, and It's actually a good thing(unlike me). The main character can be realistic, he has flaws, strength. Well, keep writing more because I'm going to bid this story good luck.
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