Review Detail of fagfaghahadshs in The Dream Shifter

I like your writing style; it's excellent! Grammar and punctuation are all fine. You got a really nice vocabulary there, I can say. However, I think you can extend it much further, but considering you're writing too many chapters per day with a large length, I can say it's worthy of praise and it's really admirable. Updates are ideal! However, I've got a piece of advice here for you: Why not make the chapters shorter? It gets a little bit tedious to read a chapter with a long length. My suggestion is to make the chapters' length near 1.2k words. This way, you can release more chapters and be in the update list for more time and also exceed your views. Your readers won't get bored and will read the other parts when they can. Doesn't it sound better? Also, the paragraphs are a bit too long. There is much distinct information in each paragraph I noticed, so why not split them into more paragraphs centered on that different information you want to give your readers? I've enjoyed the story until volume 1. I will give a better review when things go further. And let's be honest, the real challenge starts in the middle of the way. So don't lose your motivation and don't drop this novel because you can get a good place at TOP with this update stability and writing quality. But anyway, it's just me advising and it's your choice. Have a fun time writing!