Review Detail of Freylingo in The Dream Shifter

Very unique story, your wordings and how you write is precisely smooth, it is readable and I enjoyed reading the first chapter so as knowing the characters especially Yuki, I like the plot terms you made and your creativity they have potential. Me... is also a an Author who's hardworking to enhance my writing skills so being said that you write so well is something to be proud of. Good Luck Author! keep up the good work.