Review Detail of Authoricht in The Dream Shifter

I really like how the story is highly influenced by japanese light novels as I am an avid fan myself. The concept behind the story is fairly untouched and bizzare enough that makes you want to read more. There is little to speak of in terms of errors but I think you should utilize commas more in the narrations, that's all. Amazing story! Keep up the good work author!!! ʕ•ﻌ•ʔ