Crystillia
ooooh this is a different approach! I like it! I have to search the word Bokken, and it amazed me! (Japanese wooden sword used for training in kenjutsu, for all the readers who are stopping by at the review section) anywaay, I really love the concept here! You should add more tags to attract more readers! Thats all I can say for now. Good job, author!
I feel that this isn't ready for prime time. The translation is all over the place, with wrong words, incorrect grammar nand punctuation, and more. It is hard to get into the story with these barriers in the way. The author has an interesting story, but it is overshadowed by the poor translation/writing.
I really liked the author notes continuing side by side with novel. I'm interested in finding more about what happens further in story . Right from first chapter I am hooked in story. I was already taking side of aichi vs gao 100th match but turning point strucked hard. Waiting for more chapters by author...
Writing quality is good with almost no mistakes. But the story development is a bit dull for me. On the other hand the characters and fight scene are awesome. Maybe you will be improving the story more in the future or it has something up in the sleeves. But for now we can only wait for more chapters.
Something that stands out in this novel compared to the rest is the use of complex vocabulary. It gives it a sort of "fancy" edge to it which I personally enjoy. The only slight problem is the occasional grammatical errors however they are not to the point where the novel becomes unreadable. One last thing, I'm a bit confused on the uploading schedule but its a good novel so I'll be bias and give a full 5 star review.
This is a really well-developed story. I love the world of Martial Arts the author has created here. The prologue opens with quite the hook with a blistering fight scene and the disappearance of a character, which I assume will be a mystery to be addressed in future installments. The book is filled with a great cast of characters, each with their own unique personalities. The protagonist is strong and has a never-say-die attitude that is quite appealing, especially in his big fight scene in chapters 3-4. And speaking of fight scenes, I really dug the author's style. Very tactical and well thought out, had me craving more. All in all, I think we're onto a winner with this one and I hope the author carries on with this story right to the end. Really entertaining stuff.