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Reviews of The 8 celestial orbs

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The 8 celestial orbs

Crystillia

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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

ooooh this is a different approach! I like it! I have to search the word Bokken, and it amazed me! (Japanese wooden sword used for training in kenjutsu, for all the readers who are stopping by at the review section) anywaay, I really love the concept here! You should add more tags to attract more readers! Thats all I can say for now. Good job, author!

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Halfie_x
Halfie_xLv1Halfie_x

This novel is really engaging and promising. Your consistency, hard work and dedication really shines through in it and I can't wait to see what happens next. I will be adding this to my collection [img=update]

Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11Aeipathy_02

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Yonko_master
Yonko_masterLv2Yonko_master

The first ten chapters are very instructive concerning Japanese martial arts, it incredible how much you learn from this novel, additionally, the story development so far is top notch!

Proteety_Promi
Proteety_PromiLv3Proteety_Promi

The name of the story is really catchy. Your writing quality is good too. But the only problem I found is the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Maybe a little bit more information would attract more and more readers. Good luck!

David_Neilsen
David_NeilsenLv1David_Neilsen

I feel that this isn't ready for prime time. The translation is all over the place, with wrong words, incorrect grammar nand punctuation, and more. It is hard to get into the story with these barriers in the way. The author has an interesting story, but it is overshadowed by the poor translation/writing.

_Sha
_ShaLv10_Sha

Overall the tone of the story is set from the beginning. I can't see any grammar mistake and the character has its own space when the chapters go forward. keep up good work author.

Copper_mask
Copper_maskLv11Copper_mask

I really liked the author notes continuing side by side with novel. I'm interested in finding more about what happens further in story . Right from first chapter I am hooked in story. I was already taking side of aichi vs gao 100th match but turning point strucked hard. Waiting for more chapters by author...

Alex_Itsios
Alex_ItsiosLv1Alex_Itsios

Check out this novel! I really loved it! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Faysal_Ahmed_5058
Faysal_Ahmed_5058Lv2Faysal_Ahmed_5058

Writing quality is good with almost no mistakes. But the story development is a bit dull for me. On the other hand the characters and fight scene are awesome. Maybe you will be improving the story more in the future or it has something up in the sleeves. But for now we can only wait for more chapters.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Having read a few paragraphs, I can immediately tell that the author has poured his all. It was clunky to read at times but with few edits and finishing touches, the flow will become smoother. Congrats on your work and may your story become great in the future! BTW, I am from review swap.

adaR
adaRLv1adaR

I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

Devanshi_Rathod
Devanshi_RathodLv1Devanshi_Rathod

Unique plot !! amazing work author, well done!! World background is catchy and clear. Characters are perfectly set. Keen to see what happens next

Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv10Soun_Phavin

This story is a five-star from me. Although the synopsis isn't attractive enough, but the plot hooks me from the prologue. The character design and world development are awesome. Good job, author.

heyitsmejovi
heyitsmejoviLv2heyitsmejovi

This is a nice novel! The story development is good as well as the characters'. I saw some grammatical error but it's okay, I still enjoy reading the story anyways. Great work, author!

AMonarch
AMonarchLv2AMonarch

Something that stands out in this novel compared to the rest is the use of complex vocabulary. It gives it a sort of "fancy" edge to it which I personally enjoy. The only slight problem is the occasional grammatical errors however they are not to the point where the novel becomes unreadable. One last thing, I'm a bit confused on the uploading schedule but its a good novel so I'll be bias and give a full 5 star review.

ArnolDadi
ArnolDadiLv3ArnolDadi

Should I say that it good in one thing or should I say that it is better in another. Except for the updates, the whole thing is best. The naming style is refreshing. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]

BlindBandit
BlindBanditLv10BlindBandit

Very much engaging to the readers. The vocabulary is very captivating, Every detail in the novel was fun to read. The novel is very much never-wreaking as it is a very qualitative.

Easy_Tiger
Easy_TigerLv1Easy_Tiger

This is a really well-developed story. I love the world of Martial Arts the author has created here. The prologue opens with quite the hook with a blistering fight scene and the disappearance of a character, which I assume will be a mystery to be addressed in future installments. The book is filled with a great cast of characters, each with their own unique personalities. The protagonist is strong and has a never-say-die attitude that is quite appealing, especially in his big fight scene in chapters 3-4. And speaking of fight scenes, I really dug the author's style. Very tactical and well thought out, had me craving more. All in all, I think we're onto a winner with this one and I hope the author carries on with this story right to the end. Really entertaining stuff.

kpthe1
kpthe1Lv12kpthe1

The concept of this book itself is very unique. It is intriguing, at the same time addictive. I love the pace and flow of the plot. A perfect binge reading material. Great work!!!!