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Halfie_x3yrReplied to NakedApronOkay, thanks for the suggestion. I will change my chapter accordingly - I am always looking to improve my work :)
The sun shone down onto my skin, it's comforting warmth penetrating deep into me. I ambled along, enjoying my morning walk to school. A cool breeze swept over my face which cooled me down. Today was just an ordinary Monday morning with nothing particularly unusual going on. I checked the time on my phone- I was late. So, I quickened my pace. I forced my way through the busy crowd on the high road and raced into a more rural area. Here, there were only a few people. I walked past a large clearing in the trees. There stood a large energy factory shrouded in darkness and mystery. I always pass it on my way to school. Usually, I never think twice about it. But after the announcement that I heard today, I briefly stopped outside as I considered the impact that it would have on this daunting building and those below. I noticed the faint smell of toxic gas lingering in the air around it.- Halfie_x3yrPosted
Hey, shameless author review here I really hope that you like my work, I will be uploading at least 3/4 times per week. I hope you all like how my story is progressing; I have a lot planned ahead and I can’t wait to see all your reactions. Thank you everyone for the continued support, I feel so honoured to be able to receive such positive feedback from everyone :)
- Halfie_x3yrPosted
This novel is amazing- it really keeps on the edge of my seat throughout and is very easy to read. I love the cover art- it really makes it stand out against other novels and honestly, it looks professional. This novel is expertly crafted and your attention to detail is outstanding. My only suggestion is that I think your summary needs a bit more clarity and to be more engaging to the reader- that way, I think the novel will draw even more attention towards itself. Overall, I love this novel and I can’t wait to see where it goes in the future!! Keep up the amazing work!! [img=update]
- Halfie_x3yrPosted
All I can say is wow!! This book is so expertly written I’m honestly amazed. It is truly top-class: I love everything about it from the cover to the summary to the intricate plot and world-building. It’s like a realistic but very dark novel, which happen to be my favourite type of novel to read, so it’s straight up my street. It’s a really gripping piece that really keeps me on the edge of my seat throughout. I have no criticisms- I can tell that you have put so much effort into this book and I am sure that you will do amazing on this platform- keep up the good work!! [img=recommend]
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- Halfie_x3yrReplied to NotBeatrix
Okay, thank you!! I will do that right now [img=recommend]
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