Review Detail of Aeipathy_02 in The 8 celestial orbs

Quiet an Action packed story this is. Review Proper, Writing Quality: There are some g-errors but nothing much to cause not to enjoy reading the story. Story Development: The prologue start on the bond between Gao and Aichi then someone mysteriously abduct him while they are playing? If I'm correct. This already set the mood of the story. Then the Dojo grad, training and fighting leagues, many developments that would not bored the readers easily. The skills too are precisely described. Character Design: There are two characters that the author gave detailed bg story, Gao and Yue. This could make the readers focus more on how there life will grow and develop in the martial arts world. As for the other characters, there intro were not bad and maybe we could also learn more about them in the future chaps. Updating Stability: I see from the notes, that the author follows an update schedule which is good so readers could know when will the story be updated. World Background: Written Well. I see no problems here. Overall, this work is already a great read for me. I would keep this in my collections and see how the the mc's will strive in the martial arts world. Great Work Author!